Reviews of A New World by SlyOW - Webnovel

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the story is all over the place and the war is to long it can use a lot of more work .......................................................

I think it could have been better if it ended with the beginning of naruto with the mc kids being a little older than naruto and whatever thAt endIng sucked thats all

How stupid can the story get ? Well thanks to the author even i don’t know the limit. Author wrote Naruto fanfic without even spelling Konoha correctly every time. He said that Konoha had milion ninjas on second war and meny more BS stupid stuff not worth repeating. Writing quality of primary school kid. No proofread and author doesn’t even spell the mc name correctly. So the story is shiit.

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This a good story.The characters developments are good.If you are intrested in op mc stories then you should read it. I also like Ocxmikot pairing

Was good for something different to cannon but also very rushed and felt like it was being forced into the world sometimes but I enjoyed the difference between the normal and this way of using strength

While the author could have expanded the story with more progression and including the naruto generation, he decided to end it early with the death of madara. I think that it is a shame since author's writing is really good despite using naruto as the world for his fanfic.

it,s realy good but it was going to be better if u add a few more to finish the unfinishied stuff ................................................................

Good story the Mc is not too powerful so there is the construction of a story that holds the road The big positive point is that there is an end

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It’s a really nice story. Well written and wraps up nicely. The story shows the flow of events during the second and third shenobi wars and how things could have played out differently.

Pretty gud, a lot of grammar issues but still readable. In the end it was fun to see things actually get better, i’m hoping for a sequel or someting for another world.

Honestly it’s mediocore at best. The story is also written really badly, not so badly that I couldn’t understand anything, but bad enough that it completely ruins the immersion and you don’t feel anything for the characters. The only reason I read it was because I was bored and it wasn’t very long/ only read it if you have nothing else to do(like literally nothing at all).

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I got to say this is the the best of the best if you don't read this you have missed out on one of the great novels. I have been reading it since the start and it is the one of the best fan-fics maybe the best but it is undoublty the best. The author is the best author possible also delivers on time unless he doesn't have time or he gives a proper reason.

I won't comment too much on grammar and spelling which isn't good at all because it is the author's second language. I will just say that the writing pulls me out of the story very quickly. The story itself is only fine with the main character starting out as an overpowered genius. We don't see the character have any difficulties at all which reduces any interest. I personally don't recommend this story since there's entire sites filled with Naruto fanfiction, a decent amount of which is significantly better than this. I will admit I'm only writing this on the basis of the first 20 chapters and maybe the author improves a lot. But at the moment, I can't force myself to enjoy it.

This novel always made me smile due to many grammatical errors I am not expecting it to be perfect however even the basic sentencing form nor the usage of words is wrong making my day seems bright :). The story is nice typical the story is from the Naruto world so no originality there OP MC getting arrogant along the way like your chinese webnovel because I am OP something like that, I am reading because it made me smile due to grammar errors but if you can take it I guess the story is nice just don’t expect that the MC is a great person the author made him a genius and resulting to arrogance he’s your typical chinese webnovel MC.

....this road hmm...I would like for the author to not make the MC like Madara or Sasuke..... but over all it is very good keep up the good work! And also being a being that embodies destruction have other paths as well umm... for this path only grievance and sorrow will beared fruit from this

Good story, I gave a 4/5 for world background only because it's a fan fic so people who read it already know the world most likely and there is nothing to add to the world(kind of).

muito boa a forma q abrange os uchiha .

Very enjoyable read! It’s cool to read a naruto fanfic in minato’s era instead of the usual naruto era fanfics. I like the mc because he has his own ideals and doesn’t struggle for holage position and such. Keep up the good work! P.s. Please get an editor because the grammer and sentence buildings can get a little messy though still understandable and readable

At first i didn't expect much from this work, but the more i read the more i'm being pulled into the story. You're really get a good naruto fanfic with so much potential here. Fromthe writing quality, it was actually can be categorized as well writen. Though, there are some part that maybe need to be fixed in my opinion. I observed that the author writing style consist more of description paragraphs than dialouge. For many maybe, it was not a problem at all. But i must say that it may make some peope get easily bored when reading. That being said, maybe increasing the dialouge between characther will be a good idea since it will make the story feel more alive. Beside it, overall it was really a nice work with interesting character, plot, and story idea. Thanks and keep the good work. :)

This story is about a prodigy from the Uchiha clan who was born before the second ninja war. Unfortunately it lacks in character development and is mainly a poorly thought out wishfulfillment novel. Writing quality: The author does not seem to know what paragraphs are. This combined with long sentences makes for a poor reading experience. The grammar and spelling are not that great either but passable at least. Story development: Shortened academy arc followed by the second ninja war. Standard stuff for naruto fanfictions. After the academy thee MC seems to just go rambo on everything he meets, no matter the matchups. Higher level opponent? GO IN FOR THE KILL! Heavily outnumbered? GO IN FOR THE KILLS! Anyone with less plot armor would be a corpse already, not to mention some victories make no sense with 2vs1000 fights happening and somehow being won solely because he's the MC. On top of that he somehow gets everyone's respect cause he's awesome and keeps winning fights he has no business winning. Wish fulfillment without actual good ideas or planning from the MC, he just jumps into everything and wins by pure plot armor. Stability of updates: Chapters are frequent. Characters: The MC is a prodigy who has the goal of becoming stronger. The character itself is incredibly 2D since the MC only cares for jumping into battles and gets angry when someone he knows is hurt and does not seem to have other traits. The side characters are cardboard cutouts as well, they are mentioned by name and ninja rank but do not seem to do anything besides telling the MC to care for his friends and fight enemies. There's no humour, interesting quotes or actually developed personalities to be found. World Background: Absolutely terrible. The entire ninja village structure of the second SHINOBI war has been changed to modern army structures, somehow the villages have at least 10x more shinobi than in canon. Just to enable the MC to go on huge killing sprees everything ninja has been destroyed for easy targets. It has changed a great world background into something that makes no sense instead of adding a unique twist. Either limit changes to a functional background or make sure the characters can use the changes to add an interesting spin to the story. In this case all we get is a loss of strategy and mindgames in exchange for unbelievable fights with tons of plot armor.

I was very excited going into the novel as it has pretty good reviews and a fair number of chapters but after reading a few chapters in I was disappointed by the lack of depth both of the mc and world. I don't understand how this is so highly rated but if you're just in the mood to read another OP mc Naruto fanfic then be my guest.