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TheGodlyFateFox
The ntr hits me very hard and I can't find myself reading the story any longer. I was relly interested in the story so that came out of nowhere.
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Sagvey_Ay
All this power, wealth and knowledge ends with a monkey wanting to become a vampire no revenge no anger no desire &@#&@ยฃร*#^' i'm no, i'm wondering how a mental patient can turn the 40,000k universe into a soap opera iq2ie9w0qk
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Spabsta
Uh so the wife that slept w/ another man and had a child with another manโฆ does he still end up keeping her as a wife or?
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Pouce_Bleue
NTR....................................................................................................................................................................
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Its_weezy
When is the chapter where the MC's wife gets raped??? this is a grate novel I'm trying to avoid the ntr you feel me I'm not with that.
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X_1995
It was a good story until you decided that he should marry two women who love each other and in the spare time him too. I can't believe how can a woman who broke his heart by betraying him do it again using the bond as a justification. Disgusting one.
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Zereath
dude i remembered about 2 years ago i read ur novel. Then i droppes it since i was gonna binge it but i kinda forget bout it. I remembered about dis book today and it seems that u dropped the novel? if not the may you tell me when you will continue writing author san?
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daniel_pettes
I want to see if this story continues like this, because all I read for nothing, at least this one stopped more and continued because of his explanation it was a cause of illness
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kemo_omer
this story kinda had potential but I
it's generally not my type!
this story kinda had potential but I
it's generally not my type!
this story kinda had potential but I
it's generally not my type!
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ADRENalin
To be honest or to honest this story should just be rewritten. After the so called 50 sh*** chapters i just continued on even after your sick joke of rape (may or not be your fetish. no offense author-san) and the whole harem thing is just a lost cause(makes the mc seem that he is thinking with his d***) you tried to improve more than once on this story(love the dark plot at the start) but then again you tried to make it a comedy(fu**** lame) and how you gave mc a useless innate power at the begginig was just shi*** so please (me on my knees begging) rewrite this story, it has an amaizing plot that you can show us only in a rewrite. Even if it is wrong don't listen to the good reviews or your so called loyal readers (i was one of them) but they may either drop you or just give you some nice comments to just drag you down (no major offense, tho i don't care lol) so author-san if you read this please think about how well you want the novel to go.(Good luck author-san๐)
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Journae_Askin
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Journae_Askin
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Journae_Askin
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Blaney
Bro cant believe youre from nigeria. Thats really mad, im a fan of your books and comsider them an absolute joy of a read....keep it up broooo
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Dephy_1
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the_kingsman
Love the book that I think I'm addicted to it, anyways it's nice.....,.....,..................................................................,..............,....................................,...,......................................................................................,...........................,...........
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HunterOverlord
I like the story but at times the MC can make stupid and easy to avoid mistakes. The tone of the story somtimes has drastic shifts and personalitys change too quickly. The overall plot is good and the world has a decent amount of lore but it is overly described and writen. As I get deeper into the story those problems are seen less and less. Keep it up you are getting better.
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RAGNAROK_Ravella
Great book... Always loved vampire Lore and this brought in a whole new world inside my head. I like how it progressed so far. How he discovers everything is fun and the cliffhangers are good... I love it overall... Too bad it isn't updating I would love to read more
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Markie_Jones
Dope book great characters good plot and development. I recommend reading it. Despite the typos and errors you still grab the jist of whats being said. I truly have grown and fell in love with the MC plot story and overall plight. Really great read.
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DollyGil
I love the story of this book... the character development is good and consistent then the side characters development is also good and steady i like teluna the most and gus to...
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yosiyosi
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shansevi
I really love reading novel about vampires and werewolfs who fall in love with an ordinary human. I hope this one will satisfied my interest in reading
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Jessie_crox
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callumdunn1
Itโs pretty good.................................................................................................................................
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Viraj_
It is very theoretical ,lengthy and descriptive. I cant find it after 20 chapters. Character development is way too worse.Same case is with everything.
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