Although the ending felt a little abrupt, I personally liked it and thought it was well done especially the glimpse five years into the future with all his children
I don't want this story to end but all good things must come to an end thank you for the story looking forward to when u release no 2 will be reading it thank you so much for the story.
This is the second of only 2 light novels i have ever read that has an ending. And just like the first one, I enjoyed every chapter of it. Keep on writing! You definitely have the talent for it!
only problem is he didn't bother editing the beginning of his novel. The ending felt rushed. cuz think about it. the old God his vessel was level 300 something. and mandates were at 175. he just started mandates and he was able to beat the administration. what then how did the previous vessel die. were the angels stronger than the Gods and since its possible for him to be the administrator can he go back to his time and get revenge cuz it seems that humanity was invading worlds like Alfan.
Mmm... I like the ending of the story, and you left some parts without answering like what happened to Info and the other Archangels, however that could be the plot for part 2 of the story. Also a time skip would be appreciated for part 2 and you could write some side stories about Mars children since they're bonded to be powerful, and it would be great to see how his children see him from their POV
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