Pretty good so far though I'm a but disappointed on the update schedule, overall i love the familiar themes and the way it tells its story. I do want to add that I love the idea of starting off from a goblin to evolve and improve as you go as I can name several another light novel that share similar themes and that i enjoy greatly
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I like the writing, the characters and the world but you need to work on your english more. The story is just my type though so i do hope you keep at it and update soon!
I honestly wish i could pull back the stability of updates and character design back even more to -1, this is obviously a Rip-Off of fucking Re:Monster .-. like i'm not fucking retarded and can see that's the pace this story is going,
This is an amazing up and coming story (Under 50 chapters) at the time I write this with a intelligent MC and a good plot I truly love the idea of what this author is doing and am excited for more to come
Nigga, i wanna more goblins, more caps, the hell are you doing? Eu me apaixonei pela pessoa errada~
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If you realy wanna have my heart, pls, more fucking caps
As many people commented, it has started very similarly to Re: Monster, but the MC doesn't seem as cruel. There are very glaring grammar issues, syntax problems, and some troubles painting scenes, though the intent always comes through. It appears to be someone's initial writing attempt and bears some promise. I recommend the author focus on developing independent storylines, and editing the chapter a day or two after the initial draft is done.
It is an amazing book because it develops the character thoroughly and in depth. It describes the settings perfectly. Overall I really enjoyed this book. Im hoping for an update soon. That's all.
Another monster upgrade novel... A nice attempt by the writer... The story develops well... Have some issue with the grammar but there is improvement from one chapter to another... Suitable to read if you in between novel and to relieve your boredom while waiting other novel update...
I’m just rating this with everything at 5 stars except stability of updates because I don’t remember the last time I read this.
Anyways, for the new readers, the author is either on a hiatus or dropped. The author hasn’t updated in about 4 months or so, and didn’t give a heads-up. It’s better if you do not read this with hopes for an update.
Hopefully, it isn’t because the author is suffering from issues.
Overall a good story I can’t wait to read more of I just hope this isn’t a freakishly fast cultivation story. As long as the writer keeps doing what he is doing he could make it well within the high rankings.
100% enjoyable and honestly if this novel updated regularly I do not doubt for one second that it would be able to compete with some of the older novels. This novel is well written and very engaging so I would hope that the author makes an update schedule so I can be assured of when the novel will update. I’m looking forward to your work Mr. author 🙂
Good story and interesting to read. There are many point that can be used to make the story more interesting like army building and village growth.
Thanks for this novel. Keep up the good work.
It is a pretty addictive novel, the chapters are short and easy to understand, without unnecessary details, in my opinion, this novel is one of the best here ...
Can anyone tell me the update schedule? It’ll be really helpful...
Looking at the idea gives a lot of re:monster vibes, but hopefully it will turn out to be different. As of now, the MC is slowly growing stronger. Lots of potential, but needs more description of the surroundings. Spoiler alert (I guess) -
The only thing you basically know is that he’s in the world of a game he bought for his son and the world contains monsters.
Anyways, does anyone know how many chapters the author updates per week?
The main character... Is an old man... 40 years old... Doesn't know how to play games... Barrages people with questions that have already been answered...
Old-man-child.
Very good and waiting for more! I believe that the protagonist will do well with his knowledge in botany. Waiting for the use of poisons in their fighters.
Interesting.. slow upgrade in power is not common ya know.. keep up the good work buddy..................................................................................................................................................................................
Sorry to say that the translation needs a lot of work. Seems interesting though. The review character limit is cringeworthy. 140 characters with a phone sucks. Change it pls...
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