Chapter comments on the chapter Ma Teng Dies in Battle of the book The World Online

Poor guy.. Just got revived and died in first battle. 😓

F**k it after last chapter i didnt even can immersive in this story anymore it like author think hey you mountain babarian general you are stay too long go die pufff they gone .hey iron beast i dont know where to put you in this story go die pufff they gone too. Hey new gun is op but mc still making another gun that more op let give enemie some gun so it make more intense. Puff 2 gun out of nowhere( not mention about this gun even when they ready to fight) and if ma teng survive it will be less dramatic so you go die too so your family will be angry puff. He die. If you guy wonder what im rambling about ? It because author make mc do stupid thing again and again Intel organize sundenly became stupid organize check. Aerial scout dont spot any enemy ( is it even posible? In the winter and you dont make fire for warm and cook food ? Did they eat raw rice? And if you stay cold the whole night what enegy you put ro wage war?) Charge into mountain/forest with out intel and they just dont scout ahead check. Forget about local(mountain baberien) check. All in all author make intel organize of shanhai cripple and god rank general became stupid and maybe he think its drama time so he make this sh** plot.

how many fucking names are in this novel already lmao. Part of the reaason I dropped this was because its got billions of fucking names and now way to remember them jeeezus

i thought specialty was a damn passive skill

Wow, this is the first time we hear that the specialty of the generals is an active and not a passive. ~~

Sooo many typos. Are the editors reading this stuff?

Shanhai City shall rise again

Mass release please

Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍

Zxp

Merci pour ce chapitre.

HQ is worried about how to explain this loss... HQ: hey boss we were totally surrounded by 350,000 troops and I called for a retreat... OS: OFF WITH HIS HEAD!! Really? Not!!

5 bucks says he used the revival scroll

Thx 4 the ch!

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