Chapter comments on the chapter Episode 6 (part 1): Cake to a Woman's Heart! of the book The Anime Trope System: Stone vs. the Viper, a LitRPG novel. [Froze]

Wait, so is nobody going to make a comment on the loli in a box?

ok until i see another person information other than the mc in full which isn't cock blocked which says isn't high enough or see above i'm goingto give each chapter 1 star

"There was a little anime girl inside the box, sleeping. A loli in a box." Oh nooooooo... "He pulled out his phone to call the police" Phew! This scenario right here is the difference between good writing and bad writing. If this was the first 10 chapters of this Novel the Author would have had him open the box and welcome the new loli with open arms as a new cast member, no questions asked. Then we readers would have to put up with her as she screeched and whined for the foreseeable future no matter how forced her introduction or how much the plot wasn't ready for such a development yet. But instead the Author make it as a clever nod to another anime while (and this is the important bit) acknowledging that the story wasn't ready for such a character yet. Now if he keeps up this correct line of logic he might reign in the other 4 or 5 random girls he's introduced in order to focus on the Main Characters a bit more to give them more depth then they currently have. Here's hoping!

hmmm, vote on Clare!!~

Hmmmmmmm....Where's the world background? How can I fully understand the concept of the Story/world if there's no world background. How can i know what type of city or world sato or something, the structure of the world. Is the store where clare worked is a weapon shop? Is there a adventurer association or organization that defend againts monster? Anyway the background is lacking in every way. Hmm. Where did the monsters came from? How did the gifted or people knew about leveling system? Why did the confident and cautious MC became an Idiot instantly? The girls and women are kinda bizzare, there personality is monotone and repetitive, How could they attached to the MC at first meeting, Anyway they are the same. So easy and flirty? Damn just make a hentai, Making a plot? But forcing a plot through the disguise of System quest? It's literally messed up now, it was kinda interesting at the beginning but now, I'm a bit disappointed.

Is it me or did I read wrong. I thought he got onto the bus to go to the grasslands, not to go shopping...

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Yea why couldn't he keep loli in the box, she may have been powerful

Thanks for the chapter :D

Thanks for the update

So is the boi gonna tap someone or notm

interesante.

We never see the loli again. Made me flinch, author. Weird mystery but old joke.