Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 13- SMUT of the book REINCARNATION OF A SUPERSTAR (BL)

The chap is so sexy but it also needs improvements specially when it comes to (pleasure, moans, movements, and lust) I also saw some wronged spelling... Just reminding... Author you've done a great job

It was a good chapter but I could use a little work. Specifically in expressing the lust and the feelings! Other than that I like it!

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Ahh~ good Job 😉 and bathroom in the Office is on my wishlist