The story was decent in the start i guess. The problem is that i just cant keep reading after the 4th chapter when he gets his wand. I should probably read more to do a review but its just not possible for me.
It's a real shame this turned out to be a harem (didn't check the tags before reading) , I really liked the writing even though mc being a genius was a little over the top since there is no reasonable explenation why he would ever be .
All in all , good novel , just not for me .
La historia es preciosisima de por si!!! Pero de verdad me gustaria volver a leerla con sus nuevos capitulos porfavor, autor se que algun dia encontraras mi mensaje asiq ue lo escribire: POR FAVOR VUELVE CON LA HISTORIA!!!! Amamos tu historia y queremos saber como lo llegas a terminar en un futuro porfavor, tus verdaderos fanaticos te seguiran esperando.
Muy buena historia, te envia directo al mundo de Harry potter y te muestra otra cara de la moneda, aunque en su mayoria se centra en Griffindor y Slytherin, hubierasido genial que Ravenclaw y Hufflepuff estuvieran tambien... sobre la pausa de 2 años... por favor vuelve...
Is there no other sites for this story?? its too good to be true, though i cant blame the author but its just... really that hard not to like know the rest of the story its just that good too good actually
This book si good but why author drop this :(. Iove this hermiona :( ...................................................................................
nul ennemie inconnue a deux balle
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Alarm, Author drop this title!!!
Why no one said that author dropped title? I like story and in really interesting moment author leave me with poker face… disappointing
I really liked thIs book but it unfortunately got dropped :( Hopefully it will be picked back up before the author forgets how to write. Come back author!
Man this is a fantastic fan fiction!
One of my top 10 hp fanfictions
Wish the author would finish It.
The story ends In a cliff hanger!
Anyways its worth a read even though it hasnt bern completed
I don't know why people keep criticizing this Fan-fic when it's good. even though there was a bit of mistake but it was still readable and the plots were so good, but yeah, sometimes it's boring. thank god for the criticism from Basher, Author didn't take it to the heart and managed to reach 199 chapters. though a little sad since The author of the novel might lose the inspiration for writing this. The characters are good, and mostly our Mc. I hope that the Author would continue or Someone as good as him would continue this. but if that's possible I hope that it doesn't rewrite nor changes anything about the story. since Draco and the 7 women haven't met in real life. so Guys I hope someone would continue the book. I probably would but I'm still an amateur when it comes to like this.
Not bad, it is regrettable that it did not continue. You should at least finish the second part. Although there are some parts of the story that do not make a lot of sense, it is much better than other novels that I have read. That is why I generally do not read unfinished novels, because the author might give up halfway. When I started reading I did not know that the novel had been abandoned. Pity..... well, to find another one.
Well written and structured with an intriguong new take on old characters.
That said, as soon as the training wheels of the original canon came off the and Mc had his first adventure it became something akin to twilight fanfiction on its worst day. Dropped and never looking at this again.
Truly a disappointment
1- the spelling mistakes were all over and the descriptions were horrible. he used "che" constantly and wrote sighing as if it was something the characters said.
2- the way he did magic was unique in the most part but often made little to no sense.
3- the mc went from smart to bratty and ignorant. and he made other characters have knowledge that surpassed graduates of hogwarts before he even meets them. and even though the mc has newt level knowledge, Hermione is still smarter in class. it is confusing since it portrays him as someone years ahead in knowledge needs help from two kids who shouldn't even be close in the intelligence category.
4- the biggest problem for me was he added another reincarnator in this fic as the mc's rival without any warning. that 100 percent killed this for me, the idea isn't horrible but the execution was. he should have made it known from the beginning.
I would recommend this to others if you can get past the inconsistencies and misuses of a great plot.
I like but you dropped
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Dear author, this novel was one of the most inspiring Harry Potter Fanfictions I have read so far. The character analysis are profound and show your love for the Differential characters. It gave me a New outlook on the Harry Potter novels and I hope you will continue to write your novel. You are a talented writer!!😀 Please, please don't stop writing😢
The story in all is quite good but at the part starting by Lockhard it got kinda weride and it also was a little creepy, but a good kinda way.
I like it, i would recomed it for other's to read.
A good read. Out of the other fanfic that I've read in relation to Harry Potter, this is one that I can get behind.
The writing is good and the stroy is great.
I can tell from just reading, I am never lost and though I care to admit, I am not much of a fan of the HP series but I can tell just by reading that the author is a good one and made it easier for me to understand the flow of the story.
As I said earlier, the story is a good read and that's coming from a guy who has only seen the movies. 😜
Beautiful story, ruined by its end and the enemy OC. Honestly, why? Why ruin a story like this one? OK adding something original but little things, this is an Harry Potter's world fanfic, you shouldn't have changed completely the story
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