Reviews of Rebirth and Rise: The Campus Business Woman by Saadia95 - Webnovel

To be fair, for me the story is a 3 star but I gave it a 1 because the other ratings were too high. This book is can be summed up in one word: cliche. It starts cliche, with the 'love interest betrayal' and 'transmigration' and keeps going with cliches, 'powerful men start getting interested' and 'jadeinspection' '#notlikeothergirls'. There is just nothing special to make it stand out. The book in its entirety has too many plot holes and character problems which are mostly due to lack of IQ. From the start, why would ths villains tell the MC about ALL their plans before her death? Why not just push her into the ocean and get it over with? The story is also too melodramatic, not realistic, and the 'plots' and 'devious schemes' are lacking IQ. And the appearence descriptions... they are just there to fill in the word count, right? I read until around chapter 70, then quit. The world building is okay, nothing too special, but it takes after Earth so I'll say the author did a good job. There are a lot of chapters, so extra points for that. Story development is so-so. The chapters do fit together most beautifully, but as I have said, everyting is melodramatized and cliched to the point I want to stop reading halfway through. The character development was the biggest issue for me. I cannot see the MC as an actual person with real flaws trying to improve herself. She is a complete Mary Sue and isn't anything more than that. All of the side characters seem flat, they either love the protag to death or hate her to death. The villains appear to only be there for the face-slapping, instead of being human beings with (perhaps, skewed) morals and feelings we can hesitantly emphathize with, they all seem cut from the same mold, the same kind of character over and over again. Everyone with even a bit of intelligence knows that these 'schemes' won't work and if the plans are found out, they are screwed. It is just not cost effective. And can't the villains have a different reaction other than shrieking madly all the time? Or 'falling in despair?' Everything is just a stupid excuse to glorify the protagonist and not actual plot. The jade part was the worst. Just an OP, self-rightous character that everyone loves and pays attention to. Most importantly, the title led me to believe this story would be about a mature, self sufficient businesswoman who powerfully leads her company on and turns herself into a powerhouse, and proceeds to live a successful and responsible career. She goes through thick and thin, but still emerges triumphant through her adventure and grows and learns more. Even rebirth is not an excuse. There is no explanation about that, but I am not sure if it will be explained in later chapters. Anyway, I did NOT think this story would be about an arrogant Mary Sue getting a reverse harem. So, average story, has lots of content worth wasting time if you are willing to switch your brain off for a while, or if you want to learn more about fantasy genre cliches, definitely NOT 4~5 star material.

I like the story, the MC and the development. But what I don't like is the ML, he's a literally a creepy stalker pervert who follows the MC almost everywhere. He even calls her family his in laws in other chapters. And forcibly kisses her a 15 year old and follows her because he doesn't want her around a 8 year old because he jealous. This is literally the tip of guy no girls think of being around but doesn't have a problem with it since he so handsome.

The story good as you keep reading on you see it the typical female fighter story where the MC is above all others but is always in second place when the ML lead starts to shows up. And then he starts to gets possessive of her ever though she a complete OP who could honestly get by without his @$# bi#ching all the time to keep her safe. And for someone who trained for so long, she blushes over the weirdest things.

Nice book with good writing skills please make her getting revenge intersating please do update this book as soon as possible and please let the content be nice

Me gusta hasta ahora, parece que se irá poniendo mejor, también espero que la historia avance y no la dejen. Muchas gracias por su trabajo 👏🏻❤️