Reviews of Heart Cultivation by _Sha - Webnovel

Though I've just started reading, I really loved the story so far. The characters are well portrayed. Moreover, it has so many chapters to binge read. To be honest, I am kinda shocked to see its not in the top 100's since it has enough chapters and a lot of potentials. It deserves more ATTENTION. Well done author. I hope you'll keep up with your good works. ☺

This story is decent and it's getting awesome, character design is great, with the female protagonist, wonder what would happen next, I am currently on the 177 chaps and I feel there is a long way to go... Keep up good work dear author.

The write up is so smooth and relatable, I love the few chapters have read so far and will definitely keep reading, thanks for your hard work. I hope my fellow reader will check this out, you will love it, am sure

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This story has a good plot and story development. The female lead, Jen Ming has a lot of confidence that she was able to unleash her inner potential and I would continue to read this one. The writing quality is good, however, there are few sentences with incomplete words and construction of sentences especially in the first few chapters. An example is 'One month she was under the care of an unknown person.' This would be better if it became - ' For one month, she was under the care of an unknown person' / She was under the care of an unknown person for one month' For me, the rest of the story was good except for that because I always space out when there's something wrong with the construction of words. Although, I knew that the author is improving because the chapters above 30 have better grammar than the first few chapters. This story is quite popular as it is, I think and would be known more as the author improves. :) Well, good luck author!

I am amazed how the MC was trained as young as she is 5 years old only and sent at this unique school of Primary Grades where they also are yrained to be smart and independent. MC must be one of the smartest kid of her age. It's interesting how the author have wrote all these specific details.Keep it up! This is a great book then.

I like the author's plot and weaving of the story. In general, the writing quality is good with little mistakes regarding spelling and grammer, however the capital letters and exclamation marks bothered me a little. The author described things well, however it was a little uncomfortable read with the punctuation marks the way they were. Good job😊

Excellent, fellow author, I will tell you what, I didnt have much time (had to sleep, ya know.) but since I had read the first chapter which btw caught my eye, so I went on and realised that my eyes were heavy by the time I reached 20th chapter. So you know what I am talking about. It does what it should. It doesn't matter about anything like writing quality and bla bla bla... Because it ATTRACTS.

My immortal friend, I can't help it but to call you lord of the yellow river. Your plot line is very good. The best parts are the story line and the characters. As a daoist, your storyline is excellent. I will keep following your work to see how it further develops. Great job.

Read up to chapter 11 Writing Quality - I could only see few grammatical errors, and can be disregard. The things that I am confused about was the over use of punctuational mark. Elli**is is mostly use in conversation if the speaker is thinking for the next words. It isn't right to use it to divide sentences. (Suggest to delete it for the sake of grammar.) Exclamation point is use to express emotion, so if it was use that way, I couldn't get the feeling you want to express. Character design - The FL is a cute humble little one in the beginning chapter. I couldn't help but think how she will grow up. Story development - Slow pace. It starts from the very beginning. The childhood of the MC. Hope these help! Keep up the good work.👍

This story is different from the generic run-of-the-mill novels the readers usually get to read on this site. The world building and the progression of the MC are beautifully depicted with the author paying minute attention to details. All in all, a good read for an idyllic day to pass away the time 🙂 Keep up the good work, author!

Definitely a unique writing style that I've ever come across. Reminds me of Geronimo Stilton series. There are some editing required but other than that the plot looks promising.

A review at 25 chapters. An evolving narrative with an interesting context based punctuation. Good Job. Good job. Good Job. Good Job. Good Job.

At first I was confused by all the capitalizations, underscores and excessive exclamation marks. The Gramma isn't an issue here, it's actually quite good for WN content but here's the thing: This novel reads like someone's brainstorm draft. It's looks like the forming skeleton of a novel to be written. There's a main idea, there's a flow and parts& pieces of well thought out details. It is essentially the type of eastern cultivation novel that's so popular with readers. But if you can't get used to reading the style, it looks like only a base frame, the draft of a novel. There's so many chapters and so much to work with. The world build up is very well thought out while the lack on characterization could be fleshed out by going back and filling in the book more. Obviously the author put a lot of planning into this work, it just needs to be fleshed out.

The start is pretty interesting, i say. And what made me happy the most is that it has more thab 150 chapters available! Alright, time to binge read 💖 However, Omg, what's with the (..!!), (_), (_!) in every paragraph? You should fix this asap, i mean, i had a hard time reading it huhu. I checked the latest chaps and its decent, so i guess you're in the process of doing so. well then good luck author! Goodjob!

I hope you could clean the inappropriately used exclamation marks and underscores, it really felt weird seeing almost every paragraph ending with exclamation marks. That's my only complaint as everything seemed fine and great. You could also try using grammarly, it will help you a lot. I myself personally just downloaded it earlier and it was great in cleaning errors.

An interesting take on the main character and the fate that binds everything together. A good read for new readers as more experienced ones. This novel also has a different view on eastern fantasy. I personally like it. Writing quality and character design can be improved but other than that it is a good read! Keep up the hard work! Without new chapters I’ll be turning in my bed without sleep!

This story seems promising. I read it like gobbled fast. I hope updates will be stable. Try this eastern fantasy, I am sure it won't disappoint you.

(Like 60+ chapters in and will read more tomorrow but this deserves review because it's good story if you're hesitating to read it trust me and read...) The beginning did a great job to introduce the story and main character, telling us about her personal life when it was "carefree". I like that we aren't thrown in out of nowhere but you slowly ease us into the story and that is what good pacing is. The way the character speaks are wise and do resemble a lot of the actual chinese novels I read too so it's really believable when they interact with each other. When you describe the places, I like how there are new words I don't know and it actually makes the story feel much richer as well. I like how it feels like a simple slice of life about Jen's school life at Yellow River school and how she grows as a character and meets friends. The chinese history and customs are always so interesting and the way you explain your world keeps me on my toes too!! It's so cool watching Jen in all the classes/stages. The action does not disappoint! Suggestions could be double checking grammar. Could still get through story and didnt bother me but there was some long running sentences that could be cut down. Cultivation names are hard for me too haha... Added to my library and shall continue reading tonight/will leave some more thoughts when i get to final chapter

I read through the first few chapters for now, and I must say that it got me hooked up. It needs a tad bit of corrections with the grammar, and other than that, I find everything rather amazing! Keep up!

I like the plot of the story but in my opinion I find 'comma splicing' to be very hard to read. I am in the first parts of the story and according to the other raters,your way of writing seemingly have changed? So i will keep this in my lubrary and continue to read it until I reach the 100+ part of the story hehe. Neverhtless,i am excited!