Para mi en lo personal me gusto la trama en general pero siento que fue un poco demasiado rápido su proceso de crecimiento y la compañía de más personajes que deberian tener gran importancia pero que actúan en un papel completamente irrelevante, casi parece que los pusieron ahí de relleno y eso les quita seriedad como si pareciera que solo son útiles en algo y que en los demás aspectos son completamente irrelevantes, el "villano" no está tan bien definido solo nos dan pistas de que alguien hizo algo que arruinó sus planes, que usaron a otro enemigo como carne de cañón, etc pero no se nos revela quien es, y cual es su objetivo, su razón, el porque el esta haciendo lo que esta haciendo que fue lo que lo motivó, que tiene ella que el necesite, si quiere venganza diversión amor o solo por casualidad, se deberia aclarar en que dirección está llendo esta historia con que temas se van a tratar y como vas tratar cada tema sin dejar otro de lado, ademas de la coherencia de la lectura de la que no me quejo esta entendible, para que todos puedan disfrutarlo y no tengan una maraña de ideas y momentos de la lectura que pueden confundir.Gracias por tu trabajo esto es solo una crítica constructiva sin intención de de dañar o lastimar a alguien, es lo que pienso no es necesario que lo sigan.
Before you read this , be aware that this book has been dropped! (I’m pretty sure at least)
There may be a day where the author decides to restart writing ,but it most likely won’t happen.
If you are fine reading this then go ahead! It’s a great story. Just don’t say I didn’t warn you about no more chapters coming out for the abrupt “end”😇
P.s. , if you are like me , and still have the slightest inkling that this story may be continued , leave it in your library !
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Too bad, this novel is dropped....
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There were similarities to EEWW with the Cultivation levels and the pagoda in the beginning, but there’s way too much time skips. The punctuation is kind of bad, different from other novels.
I super duper loooooooooooooved it😍😍 plsss update soon!!!!! Joined the discord but still don't know how to use it since its not popular in my country 😥😥😢 can you plss help me out
I really like the story and cant wait for author to update, still waiting for the ML. getting excited here. Hope to update sooner author.
I love Zi Hua ❤️
The story is interesting in many ways. I for myself haven't read many female lead stories so it sort of a great sight for sore eyes or (whatever its called)
The best thing about the story is that it gets better and better. In the beginning the sentences weren't very detailed and felt a bit empty but as I just said it gets better and better and the progress of that is visble. The plot is interesting and I may not have read through all the chapters... yet. But I for sure will.
The story is great, but I am hoping that it would be more clear after revising it. I can't wait for the ML to appear though. I though have concerns on how a chapter could sometime contains a short update
********************************************************* nice read..... good pleasant experience .**************(((***************(*******************
I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story. I love the story.
I like the story... It was interesting to the point that I'm looking forward to it... I was wondering who will be the man who will catch her attention and will find her interesting....
The story is okay but a little lame because so many loophole. Can you put a little adventures because like you right that the FL is adventurous so can you add a little bet..
Just started reading. The novel has potential. I can't say what the plot is but it will develop as one reads on. I would like to read further so have added the novel to my library.
Хорошо история что бы отдохнуть)
Развитие мира и персонажей происходят в довольно быстром темпе но это не мешает читать. Просто если хотите отдохнуть от длины историй где 5 глав думали как подойти и сделать первую фразу ы разговоре)
It's so amazing and the characters are so good and funny, especially that one of her spirit beast. It is so addicting. The story line is also good.Waiting for more updates to come.
Like the plot of this story... like the fl.. but as i keep on reading.. i kind of like give me more i want more.. i mean i fell like theres something missing.. the chapter are short i think..
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