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I do like a good apocolypse story and the author has the beginnings of one I hope the author will continue this story. The overall plot is interesting and the characters are a little op but whose m.c isn't these day's. I will say that the current genre of books about the apocalypse this one is pretty good.
The novel was overall enjoyable the leveling in apocalypse was the highlight it was good but the skills were abit complicated the grammer was good. However i felt the novel was abit rushed an the characters are shallow and only there to highlight how op the mc is.
This story has been really good so far. It has a good plot. My only criticism is that even though the character is supposed to be supper overpowered he doesn't seem like it. Other than thet all it needs is more chaprers. I can't wait for the next update!
Writing Quality: Barely readable. Sure there is not a lot of grammar mistakes, but the way he writes is awkward at best. The author really needs an editor, or he needs to edit his past chapters. It was tiring to read, I wanted to enjoy the novel, but the grammar errors really threw me off.
Also, he doesn't separate Info dumps of stats, so it really messes with the flow of the story. 2/5
Updates: So-so. Not a lot but not so little. No consistency of releases though.
Story: A go-to-the-past-and-fix-everything-novel. Not original but not good enough to stand out in the mountain of these types of novels.
Generally, in these types of novels, the MC doesn't have anything special about him, only the knowledge of the future. So he uses that to his advantage. But our dear author thought that that wasn't enough! He gave the MC 45 levels stats being lvl 1. one unique skill (Basically RE: Monster, killing something gives you skills or stats so your status page will be as long as an entire volume in little time), a couple of more skills (because why not?) and apparently he's surrounded by his friends who are also talented! Did you want more? 4 chapters in and he's already leading a group of 100 people that they entirely trust the MC because of STRONG MC! MUST SUCK DICK!
Character Desing: Generic MC with no personality what-so-ever. Cringe lines like "Oh thank god you are not dead, I mean...follow me, my minions!" And they just accept being lead by that.
He has a unique skill no? I have to suppose that some people do the moment the doomsday arrives...So he's not worried about one of the irregulars is in his group? Oh right, he is perfect. Nothing is capable of making a dent on him.
World Background: Meh, no existent. Only put 3 stars to maintain a 2 stars classification.
1- Edit your chapters properly. You really need to do it before keep writing.
2- Put some logic in the actions of the MC and be more interactive with the side characters.
3- Put some kind of obstacle or trouble. He's already too OP and doesn't even sweat.
Por lo que he leído hasta ahora, creo que esta novela definitivamente tiene potencial y si se hace bien podría ser bastante buena. Así que todo lo que queda es esperar más capítulos. Con suerte, será una buena.
Hello guys, I am the author of this novel.
Since this is my first time writing a novel and since I am also a university student I can't write frequently, but I will try my best to release more chapters every week but I guess for now I can only publish at most 4 chapters a week. But I promise to increase the release rate in the future.
Thanks for checking out this novel and thanks for your support.
So far so good. I love the idea of a MC that is OP but still is trying to build him a support group. It fits more the end of the world than most of the other stories. It has a lot of what I look for in stories. OP MC check, Group building check, game system check.
From what I've read so far, I believe that this novel definitely has potential and if it is done right it could be pretty good. So all that's left is to wait for more chapters. Hopefully, it will be a good one.
Sounds good so far. I like the idea of rebirth stories and game system so this story combined both seems to fit my type of stories. I really don't like info dumbs like the posted 5 chapters but I assume the author thought it was a good idea to do. Still something I am going to read unless it becomes something so bad that it not worth reading keep writing author I will read it.