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1- writing quality: I’ve read the twelve chapters that are out so far and found only a few mistakes. The writing style didn’t exactly do much to hold my attention, but it’s fine. How ever the system prompts are very annoying, reading all of them could take some time.
2-update stability: Ive read the first twelve chapters in a day or to so I don’t know how often author updates.
3-story development: in the twelve chapters I’ve read the story hasn’t gotten the chance to develop very far, but its a good start.
4-character design: all of the characters are based on sea creatures. only two of the characters have a defined personality, them being MC and his only friend/side kick
5-world background: I can’t say much on the world background. however, I like the setting.
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I enjoyed reading what little is written of Re:Aquatic Life - The Blue Serpentine. Unfortunately, it seems like the novel has been dropped. I wish the author would continue it.
This is a really good book! You should continue to writing this in your free time. The MC only acts logically which greatly satisfies me. He may be quite emotionless when it comes to others but he still has a good side to those he treasures [Little One]
Unlikely for a tsunami powerful enough to destroy UK. If there was one it would first have to have destroyed Ireland, thus greatly reducing its power. Would make more sense if you had just said tsunami destroyed Ireland and not just “ uk and surrounding British isles” as this implies it first struck the uk then surrounding British isles as this is even more unlikely for a tsunami to hit anyway. Thus It is much more likely for a tsunami to hit Ireland first
Great book with pretty good characters it kept me reading and overall great now for filler fjvouvukdsgccuoch
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i reaaaaallllllllyyyy liked the novel. i dont know much but i do know one thing and that is i want to keep reading this. so, i urge the author to write more and update frequently.
Really good so far. It has a very interesting setting for this type of novel. I look forward to future chapters.
To the author - I really liked your novel so far, take the time you need to keep your self in high spirits and to continuing to make this a wonderful novel.
Great so far just keep updating and it might be as popular as chrysalis only if you update frequently tho :3 sooooooooooo just keep updating and plz no harem
I love evolutionary creature reincarnation stories. I like that it is happening in the sea, it is still to this day one of the most mysterious and unexplored places. It is interesting and i look forward to future updates but so far it was great.
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