This is a pretty cool take on the whole evolution thing, cool creatures, nice twists, so if you have time give it a quick read you won't regret it.
**. Plz don't ever drop this
Great novel đź‘Ť I read it all (current 30 chapters) in one sitting. So much action, the twists and the world background; all of them so well-written <33
novel is a welcome twist on the system genre.
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Spoiler, maybe?
Whatever. I really enjoy this book and even though I found it a bit late this is an awesome survival novel and I find it fascinating that you managed to add another level of inception to the story to give it more plausible content paths and you added it so seamlessly by so obviously that you can tell that another step has been taken, you just don't know how. I also really enjoy how you employed minor amounts of advanced psychology in a double entendre kind of way even if you didn't notice it. Side not for all of this I'm thankful you didn't go to in-depth into the nsfw side of this novel. That fact lets me enjoy the novel much more and you have my gratitude
Story full of twists and durns. Chapter 28 and most of the stuf we were made to belive about the situation was durned upside down.
At first things seem ****** straightfoward survival novel but author adds layer upon layer to it. Cant say more as it would be spoiler.
If you like mystery and survival novels give it a chance.
I startet to read this story today and read the 30 chapters in on session.
I am a huge survivor theme fan so this story is perfect for me. Its fast paced but well written. Dont stop because some things arent logical for a moment it will solve itself. I try not to spoiler, but it got some nice twists ;).
The first 30 chapters will get a 5 star voting and i hope it will stay a interesting story.
This novel is a welcome twist on the system genre. I like the almost Pokemon flavour the story has. Waiting to see more character development, but it's nice that MC isn't op or too weak.
As of now the quality already quite high for an starting original novel. you can see the author is dedicated to this project and the story development for now as well as the world background seem to already be quite fleshed out.(in the thoughts of the author; you can see it from the side caracters in the first chapter; also the protagonist is not omnipotent and seems like a realistic person which is nice and more relateable).
Over all this story seems quite promising. I have my hopes up that it will deserve this 5 Star rating.
It seems very promising. The world do background seems very interesting. An intergalactic human society which has the technology to support distribution of gen editing devices to lesser (& richer) convicts. Another intergalactic race was named which seems (from the interaction of side characters) to have an relation with humanity that is not „only one of us can exist“(as far as I can analyse) That’s why I want to support the author with this. I do hope the novel can life up to this 5 star rating.
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