Chapter comments on the chapter Shopping and Expenses of the book Monster Integration

Well I give 3 star and why? Because although the story is in point with my wishes the writing is too bad that cost at least 1,5 star. The other half is for the development that need more attention as in the fight he conveniently increased tens of levels in the training but first focus on the writing because I like the story.

I don't think the writting is as bad as everyone is saying but it's probably because I flip things around so it sounds right and if it's written wrong I notice but it doesn't exactly affect my reading

Editor will start editing at about chapter 36 and the editing is much better. So, just hang in there a bit longer guys :-)

Yall claiming this *falls into place* is a load of bull, claiming to understand the premis is fine, but NONE of this is something that allows for fluid reading. The names don't match, the power structure is so convoluted that the AUTHOR gets **** mixed up, time scheme is ludicrous, and his pace of growth and the requirements there in are not remotely believable (and that's with plot armor thicker than a particularly famous wall in China). Following general plot points is NOT good enough to build a solid foundation for the beginning of 1000+ chapters.

Author do you even proof read what you are writing

That is a pretty goodbye

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Thank you for the update

I am totally confused about The Mana Engine and Totem and the whole power logic? Can anyone please explain???

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