Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1 - Where were you? of the book A New Beginning in a Mana Apocalypse

He has got hots for his step sis. I Likey!

Incest is disgusting. Even if it's step.

I liked the way you described mana and the elements. Way different than other novels

Also, would you be willing to add an indexed chapter with the list of his or any characters abilities? Going back to this page to re-read his affinities etc is confusing as it's not in a list. Thanks. Just a suggestion anyway,

Great start, and different! I hope he slims down. :)

It’s his step sister so he shouldn’t love her like a real sister

please don't do that ****, incest ruins stories for me.

Good start! Cant believe no one has commented on this yet.

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Thanks for the chapter!!

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Thanks for the chapter

Thx