Chapter comments on the chapter undefined of the book A New Beginning in a Mana Apocalypse

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RationalMind
He has got hots for his step sis. I Likey!
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CaptainBoyHole
Incest is disgusting. Even if it's step.
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xetMarcelo
I liked the way you described mana and the elements. Way different than other novels
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FraulCruz
Also, would you be willing to add an indexed chapter with the list of his or any characters abilities? Going back to this page to re-read his affinities etc is confusing as it's not in a list. Thanks. Just a suggestion anyway,
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FraulCruz
Great start, and different! I hope he slims down. :)
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maximusultus
It’s his step sister so he shouldn’t love her like a real sister
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Mizrael222
please don't do that ****, incest ruins stories for me.
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Liquid_Chaos
Good start! Cant believe no one has commented on this yet.
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Tenkay
Thanks for the chapter!!
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WolfLord
Thanks for the chapter
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