I’ll read either way but would vastly prefer a harem with 6 girls that matter rather than 13 cardboard cutouts. Although I do like Magen and Mary. Hate Karen though. If you do rewrite PLEASE don’t make the MC the rebound guy where everything works out for her even though she made shi**y decisions. I mean they broke up and that night she’s in his bed, yes mostly cause of Megan for unknown reasons. But seriously, can you give the MC some pride or self-respect? Would she have gone to him if he was still fat? That’s why I like Megan, because she was waiting for him to get over Megan. The beginning with just them two was the best part of this story. Him realizing that Megan’s been here for him the whole time was fantastic, and then all these other pointless girls that he doesn’t know anything about make it feel pointless and that he doesn’t really have any strong feelings for them. I mean if he’ll permanently bond a girl he’s never talked to and just met 5 minutes ago cause Megan said it’s okay, how much does he really even care about his bonded? What should be a life altering decision that will literally follow him forever is made to feel cheap and pointless. So I would prefer a rewrite but I’ll still be here if you don’t.
Thanks for the chapter.
And I personally would vote against a rewrite - Although some things seem a bit rushed and the harem is quite big, it reflects the chaos of the apocalypse happening and unknown abilities awakening.
I hate harem books but I read yours so why? I actually enjoy the story and it fits in that the extra minds connected stabilized them all in the midst of all the craziness. The crazy mana as it sounds activates abilities that are not the norm from worlds that have mana to earth with none. Keep writing cause so far its enthralling.
The main character needs to have a backbone. This dude is a double emperor and a strong gold core. Grow up and stop taking orders from just a random girl in your harem (which i hate btw). He just takes orders from them, they need something and he does it for them, how about not just taking orders?
I'll read it either way but I personally like it the way it is now you explain how the bond worked and why it happened and you still kept up with the storyline I think the bad guys coming one after the other as a bit rushed but other than that I quite like it
I don't like harems, but u made it work. Yes, it would be nice with a smaller harem and more distinctive women. But the pace of the story is good. It feels like the apocalypse really happened and they have been running ever since! Maybe give them a chapter or two to just stop running and fighting and relax for a minute. Regardless, I'm loving how the book is so far! And OMG! The oldest siblings took over!!!
Thanks for the chapter!!
Thanks for the chapters
Why does it sound like his Bond siblings' homeworld didn't have mana before the great cataclysm? They didn't know they were bonders, classroom couldn't deal with a single human changing into a twisted, entire families dying (in a world with mana, should't people be able to defend themselves better? And the Bonder family have a strong heritage from their mother's side as well which should pass on to children and grandchildren)