Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 69 - Annitte of the book A New Beginning in a Mana Apocalypse

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thx

Thanks for the chapter I quite liked the way you showed the power dynamic between the harem members here, with the beasts giving in to the Head Wife in bed. Things like this are required if you want a big harem to work imo

I think a rewrite would greatly improve the story. I think a reader suggested that there be one person per category (e.g. one plant empress, one beast empress, one human).

Thanks for the chapter and whatever you do I'm just along for the ride

A rewrite would fix some of the problems in this one but the problems are not so bad its unfix able in future chapters like the one which mainly troubles me the disregard to his authority and while being gold he is still weak

good going.

Thanks for the chapter! So he’s not gonna think about what his sister said about the new girl at all huh?

Don't do a major rewrite and **** up the good story. Just do a fucking poll like on royal road