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ayayaya

well the writing isn't top notch, probably cause the author doesn't know english as a first language. the story is okay but there are a few flaws here and there, and the writing didn't 'draw me in'. so the story was a bit boring. I give it a three.
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Kiradeux
The world background and overarching story seems incredibly interesting and I'd have loved to continue to follow the story but.. The main character is a top tier idiot. She lacks the ability to learn and the only character development she gets over twelve years in a second life is a short lived happiness. Seriously, living for around 30 years and being unable to see the malice clearly directed around yourself of children around 16, children you've grown up with... To have not created any defenses or any means to protect yourself and let yourself receive such a scar. If you can't learn from your first life, you don't deserve a second one. Reading this story to chapter 49 made me wish our protagonist would just stay dead - there are plenty of characters more worthy, no matter how horrible her first life was.
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Dani_Alvarado
Sinceramente me gusta mucho esta historia eso sΓ­ admite que hay errores pero son mΓ­nimos la trama es buena y la prota es asombrosa no paro de reΓ­rme con sus ocurrencias es genial
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Amyraluvsbts
I really don't know how to give reviews to this book. I love and dislike this book for different reasons.I love the plot of this novel, sci-fi with advanced technology, elves species and different alien world...I love this book because of these three points. These are definitely the plus point of this novel according to my preferences. I really love the humour and world settings. What I didn't like are the initial prolonged prologue, it was kind of irritating and I was ready to drop this novel. Betrayal plot again and again is kind of unnerving for me, mc is described as very intelligent, but during these betrayed plotline she becomes dumb. this plot was made to sympathize with mc, but her getting betrayed so many times for same reasons was very annoying, I really hated that part so much!! I started to like this novel during steppes plot arc and the recent plot is very intriguing!! now I'm hooked with the storyline and I hope we will get more updates.
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Jacqueline_Bryant
This story shows promise. There are a lot of errors, but they are negligible to an extent. Other than that , it's interesting. I didn't think what was happening to the main character was fair but now I get it. If you are looking for something interesting and ultimately quite good, I'd give it a try.
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vickyAlisa
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France_Jaydon
The first part of the story was honestly kind of frustrating how the FL always get the short end of the stick, and when she was reincarnated she was also easily bullied and then her fiance was easily drugged by her step sister and slept with her!!!! And to make matters worst she accepts him again!!! I mean really???!!! I know he was drugged but he was supposed to be an alpha male that is strong and all that, but he easily succumbed to another girl!!!! I mean can't the FL take a fucking break???!!! This is supposed to be her story...
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SUPER_WEIRDO
Finally was waiting days before for new updates and wow when I looked so many new chapters 😍😍😍 it seems that in the next 100 chapters or so the book will end... So far dear author I am happy that you have written such an extremely interesting and different book on this app. I appreciate all of your efforts and look forward to the remainder. To all reading my review I hope you give this book a chance it is really worth the read.
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Jessica_Oyakhilome
I love the originality of this storyπŸ’“. Once you start you get addicted to it. I love our FL, she's too cool, intelligent and cunning. If you want to read a book with suspense, thriller and action. This is the book for you 😌
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Seraphy64
First of all, this is sci-fi and maybe fantasy. It has Fae in it as of ch 28. The sci-fi crap was the final nail in the coffin for this book for me. The prologue was way too long. The MC was supposed to be a genius, but she was both too stupid and too smart. No matter how much of a genius she is, there's no way she should have been able to fix the engines in a week. Being a genius doesn't just impart knowledge into your head. She would have had to study the engine designs and everything for longer. And since its supposed to be a military operation some no name orphan isn't going to be getting the specs about anything to do with the spaceships. No matter how talented/smart you are if you don't have the resources spent on you to bring out your potential it goes to waste. Obvious Lila's would have went to waste because she was ignored (which is another stupid ass plot hole. No one realised she was a genius, and she never tried to prove she'd been having her work stolen?). Grammar is bad, but not headache-inducing like some on here. Overall I'm annoyed I wasted my time reading these chapters. I blame all you mindless 5-star reviewers for not having an ounce of taste.
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SUPER_WEIRDO
It was just sitting there a while before I decided to start reading it, I liked it... The fl.. Has a decent character build.. Some characters though would make you swear.. So a heads up about that. Though the book have a few grammatical errors it is still well written. Since it's a first book, as the author said, what really really good is that she is open for many comments with writing quality and have been trying to fix as many as she find(she had said she was review chapters from so yeh.. My conclusion) All in all I just want to say thanks for writing I can't wait for the conclusion author😝😝😊
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EeviRivendare
I adore this story. The author is very creative and the progress of the main character is inspiring. The plot is addictive and descriptive. All I want is more!
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BrightFog
I have recently found this story and from a few chapters in found myself swept away. Now I have finished all released chapters and can’t wait for more. I try to avoid spoilers so while I am over 400 chapters in I haven’t found the story to have any lulls, just a very nice progression of events in the mcs life and how she reacts to them. I do have to admit there is some foreshadowing of events from near the beginning which are still being unravelled and I am eager to see where it heads.
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SheepDude
I really love this webnovel it's probably my favorite right now. So keep up the good work.
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Kevin_Middleton
Just want to let everyone know that as of writing this review I read up to chapter 116 before dropping it. The story started out as amazing. It was a sci-fi novel that gradually shifted into the fantasy setting which is really cool. The main character was not a total idiot and had a good personality. Things started getting worse once the author got to world building. β€œHoney” was he thing that gave the world its life and without it everything would end up dying. Basically a rich person’s water, but like water, the world itself also depends on it to stay functioning. MC’s ancestor was responsible for saving the world by planting trees that produced the honey, but people got greedy and everything started going to ****. The time period the story takes place in is one where their resources are beginning to run out, but they probably have enough for another generation or two. The world building makes the world itself seem really, really small. Forget about oceans, the planet seems to be the size of a small country here on Earth. This is probably just the portrayal, but it’s really limiting the events that could come up. After the sci-fi portion of the story, it’s not really talked about again. Seems like kind of a waste. The main character was supposed to be a genius prodigy but she doesn’t apply that knowledge anywhere in her new life. There was also a lot of potential to mixing the sci-fi elements with fantasy. Despite still liking the MC, one of the sub characters was so insanely bad I ended up dropping it. You know how the story is tagged LGBT? I can tell you right now there’s BL in this story, I haven’t seen any GL yet. I could probably gloss over it, but it was so incredibly forced that it made me mad just reading about it. So MC is 12 years old and her bodyguard doesn’t have a set age, but it’s assumed he’s quite a bit older since she calls him an old man at some point. Even then they fool around with training a lot and are more like friends. The bodyguard makes a pact with his soul saying he’s always going to protect her and put her first. Skip ahead a little, the bodyguard ends up falling in love with a kid a little older than MC who happens to be a boy after talking with him like 2 or 3 times. What the hell? There wasn’t anything they talked about that could have led the bodyguard character to like the kid except for one time he decided to tease him in training a bit and before this the kid was straight. Because the bodyguard is in love at this point with the little kid he ends up throwing the MC in to dangerous situations that he knows he shouldn’t be doing, but does so anyways. Seriously? He already made a pact with his soul. The situation is forced to the max and it only seems included to use the LGBT tag. It’s really creepy too just picturing the situation. At this point I dropped it, but skipping around and skimming some future chapters the book that seemed like it could have been a fantasy, adventure, slice-of-life, seems to be a fantasy, political, romance novel. There’s a lot of talk about kingdom inheritances, marriages, and political scheming. Some of you guys may prefer it, but it’s not my cup of tea. By the way MC is 12 when she first meets the love interest who happens to be a 19 year old guy. Again the ages seem to be too off. Sure she’s reincarnated but everybody else doesn’t know that okay? I didn’t read the details though, but the age gap should still be there. Story had really good potential early on, but it crashed due to forced themes and genre shift. I wish I could read the story that this could have been. If there was no romance at all and the characters ended up staying as friends instead of love interests, it would have cleared up most of its problems I think.
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animelover1477
DISCLAIMER All of these are my opinion and trying not to bash the hardworking author but point out my viewpoints. So take with a grain of salt. I felt this novel is overrated. I don't think its a solid 4 or above, instead maybe around a solid 3/5. Because it has excellent written quality but it lacks the extra oomph that makes me fall in love and binge read this novel. Thats if I compare it to how I usually am when reading magic/reborn novels. I love to read those in one sitting, but this one I read till ch 60 caught up to maybe ch 90 currently. I got to first give props to the complexity of the world building. Because thats takes brain power to even figure out the intricacies of the characters and their relationships. There is also the details that the writting envoked, the world building was subtle and character personalities was seen well through the writing. So although I'm frustrated, its still skill that made me allign with mika's life and her feelings.So ill give 5/5 for written component only. I would give 3/5 for overal story devlopment. I don't like that the book is depressing. In the beginning I didn't like how overly naive she was. But the author redeems themselves with the character of mika. She is badass and funny. So I do love the humor on the book. So the banter between mika and her companions is cute and the only light in her depressing life. Like after dying, she has to deal with her family responsibilities as a fae, deal with clan issue. And on top of that other ppl clan issue like can't mika catch a break. And I have got to say all males (except her guard and drako) in the book are selfish or just plain assholes. Her father I don't care I wont pity him because he made his choices and has to live with them. Its selfish to expect more from mikas mom or others. Thera or whatever that other clan leaders name was , he's a plain idiot, has too much pride for a weak ass boy, yes not man if he can't even see the things happening around him within his own clan, and has the balls to yell at mika or belittle her when she can see things more clearly.πŸ€”πŸ˜‘πŸ™„. Overal my disappointment comes from being frustrated that mika has to deal with her father clan problems, on top of her fae ppl problems, on top of that boy whos clan got annihilated, on top of thera clan problems. There less funny and relaxing moments except for comic relief with mika witty combacks and her new companions. Again , author thanks for the hard work. FightingπŸ˜‹βœŠπŸΎ
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Dubdebub
I find that almost everything in this story is perfect. The reason I find this story to be a story I can't read is that it's nothing but one negative after another. The beginning is super depressing and just frustrating. Afterwards it gets somewhat better but then the positive emediatly gets ruined by more negative plot that isn't even needed. I read to get away from the negitives of life, not to read about depressing storylines.
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RachelQueen
I absolutely looooovvvveeee the femalead❀️❀️ so much power and brain. I'm impressed over the complexity of the world, and I find it quite fun to know more of the backstory of the FL. Must read!
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ladybird2030
A really good read! The FL is very spunky and mischievous enough that she reminds me of someone I know, lol. At time I feel really sorry for her father. I wish them all the best luck in the combing chapters and here is hoping for a good long read!
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SamSike
I love this book. It is just amazing. I have been searching for female mc novels and I have read many. This is a fantastic novel with a calm and sometimes mature protagonist. This is one of the best novels I have read. Thanks to the author for writing this book.
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Anisha_Jain
The first person to make sure the child was a member and a lot more people in his life than they were from the same thing was the only one who could be able and
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Jillsweet
Really amazing book ... I keep me hook all through it ... FL is amazing.. man she has really sharp really enjoyed reading it... Good work authors . looking forward for next chapters plz update soon 😘
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RozaliNnN
Honestly I should apologize for my initial desire to not read this novel. I looked at the 4.5 rating and desided that it wasn't worth it.😣😣 But I was proven soooooo wrong! This is a hidden Gem!! ❀ The beginning of scifi type of story wasn't much to my liking but afterwards when it changed, OMG it was such a good story! I don't know why it have such a low rating. Some ppl say its because of bad spelling but honestly there might be 1 grammar mistake in 20 chapters. Not even worth lowering the rate for. Honestly I beyond highly recommend it! Read and don't regret. As soon as the space travel part is over I swear the story get soooo good! ❀❀
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