Its a good read. Ive noticed a few errors in grammar and spelling, but the story is okay. Though I can't tell if tge main character is good or evil, which is spicy. The seen where Gary's mom was killed by that wolf was gory...Im impressed that you managed to implant that image in my head. It raised my opinion of this book a lot. I have a few problems. One is that that i havent been given a description of Ren himself. Overall..good job. Feel free to read and review my book, Draga of the Vanguard.
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Read this at your own risk XD
A story about a fallen God who wanted to reclaim everything that was stolen from him. Sounds cliche but read first before you judge :D :D
so far so good. will edit this after reading the latest chapters. but for now, please release more.
I like the MC, Ren. Bad-ass kicking.
I hope there are more face slaps in the future chapters. please release more.
jackiefern