Chapter comments on the chapter The Holyland... And An Encounter of the book I'm a Vampire God?!

The government gave him to much money.instead give him a monthly allowance.have vampires donate the mansion.and I feel like you are vearing into another genre with the mmo.also another thing is that you are catering to the readers far to much. So less bl stuff.you are breaking too many walls with the mmo and it will overload the story so try to stick with the real world.create a threat for him to have to fight. Also try not to keep him in school long.he should be killing stuff by now.be careful on giving him powers because the enemies have to be strong enough to be a threat.it would be nice if his blood creates perfectly loyal vampires.and the ones he didn't make can betray him. But that he can convert them by force

20billion yen is around 180 million dollars, not 180k.

<spoiler> Funny you should mention vampires giving him the mansion... that's what actually happened. When the main character appeared in the world, all of the strongest supernatural creatures felt his presence and roughly where he was. Vampires infiltrated the highest levels of the international government, and were able to help him through these means. Remember how I said how vampires can sense him and who he is? They did that, just from really far away. Thanks for your critique. And for the 20 billion yen, I have plans for how he's going to use that money, and as you can guess the money came from vampires too. More specifically an international vampire banking company provided the money. They're everywhere lol. Thanks for reading, and please continue criticizing it helps me loads! Love ya, Ellendria

Oooh author can you introduce a loyalty system to check of a vampire is loyal to him like let’s say A random person or vampire is at 50/100 while a ememy is at 20/100 am main cast like harem members or the Butler is at the 100/100 Could also lead into a semi faction thingy

oooh he's gonna get some op stats in that game haha , interesting concept

I dont know if that Yen to USD is right

20 billion (20,000,000,000) yen is equivalent to about 180 MILLION USD, not 180 thousand (180k). As generous as the government seems to be in this world I doubt they are going to give some random 15 year old the equivalent of a medium sized country's GDP.

You should make a mechanism for when you turn other people into vampires or the vampires that work under you, like you can control their life and death and can kill them whenever you want. Though you should keep it a secret, because with intellectual beings there will be some greedy ones that want a bigger slice of the pie.

it would be interesting if he's a vampire god in the game as well and the vampires in there are completely loyal and faithful.

Thanks for the chapter

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I dont know my japanese but i am pretty sure 20 billion is over 170 million €

Onion ninja: we didn't miss you just never realized you were struck

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Okay , the character in this novel is overdramatic

Thx

So, what races do you guys think I should have Shinji and Yuuske use? I mean we're all clear on Cyde right?

I finally deleted them all.... over 200 drafts.... that took a lot out of me. One delete at a time... and the button didn't always work. Sometimes I'd have to click the same one twenty times in a row to delete it... please no more....

Kampai! 🍻 Sorry it took a bit guys. I hit a weird snag. For someone reason this chapter has a ton of drafts saved, and I never saved any. My screen was glitching out while I was editing and made it very hard to write the last few words. Also it kept sending me to the top of the chapter... I'm not looking forward to deleting hundreds of drafts...