Chapter comments on the chapter Getting to know each other & The start of the main story of the book The Great Journey With a System

If I think I’m right the Mc will take Yun Chen treasure somehow and torture (hopefully) then kill him and get Jasmine and then be the Mc if the story plz be something like thing

Kill YC

Yun Che must be an asshole of a character for all the readers to say that. Haven't read the Original but this fanfic is awesome. Work hard. All my power and energy stone for you from now on.

he doesn't have to say anything to Xia Qingyue, say that he is from the uchiha show clan, which makes him famous, just say that they are users of illusions or things like that, tell her the X of the question Shisui died because Danzou wanted his eyes, and the MC still has no power to defend himself.

Kill YUN CHE

I thought he would tell her that he reincarnated, for so much details he gave..

Thanks for the chapter

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I am not gonna kill Yun Che. He still has some value to the story later on during the tournament arc

I do not know, the wedding on Yun Che, looks like a farce. What is the meaning of this? If he decided to add it to the harem, why not reveal its origin during these two months? After all, he is not Xiao Che. Before hitting, he was not Xiao. Well, I’m not really against it if he leaves him alive, and everything will go on like in that fanfiction, with some changes. In any case, the hero now has a motive of aggression against Yun Che. Jealousy. Easy to explain, right? But didn't Yun Che discover the meridians for his, now wife? For the latter, he had to see her naked. Not that it was necessary, but in the original, he forced her to undress. I just don't remember, did he do it when he came back or before he left?

There are many stories in Chinese novels or fan fiction where the author from China creates "dialogue" where the female character is always fascinated when she meets/sees the MC or dialogue where the female character will be "angry" because the MC ignores her even though she is beautiful and will try to approach her because she is ignored. ... yeah I'll be honest, the dialogue of women in cn novels when they first meet the mc or are introduced to the reader is really terrible. I don't know if every man from China from their point of view, the sentences said in their hearts by women are like that.

y una mierda eso de decirle sus habilidades oculares es de pendejos y porque demonios le quitas lo genial su escencia de itachi que es su careto de hielo, pendejo como todos los Uchiha palo en el culo.

ya me di cuenta por que deje de leer este fan-fic en primer lugar, por los cambios de apariencia en los personajes por es auto de mrd

Hmm wasn't the sky poison pearl attached to his body? How is he going to steal it?

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Thanks for the update

Saeko? Seriously? Though it's not like I hate Saeko, rather, I like her but their *ahem* characteristics *ahem* are to different.

yun che got cucked. lol

Thanks for the chapter!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!!!

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