Reviews of Journey to the True Martial World

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4.23

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anime_lover_3585
Are you dropping plz plz plz don't. Tsysydydufiig88f8f8fioggiicicigpigiguvuhuhhgghgghghsdjdiffkgifigkfufjfjfggfdseeethhhddeerttyhhhhyh
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Deus_das_fanfics
eu gosto de novels que val para outro mundo tipo esse mas o desenvolvimento falta a energia dos mundos que ele esta pegando para a novel mas e unica e isso fas ele especial,E os mundos de treinamento não acho que seja a melhor escolha e habilidades nem van ser boas comparado a algus manga e novels
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Lyrrad
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lizardman
Very confusing for the first few chapters. I've just watched Naruto but I'm not a fan. Many of the names just sound familiar to me but I do not remember them. This makes it painfully difficult to read and understand what is going on.
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skidzee
Really slow development. Starting really confusing. Mc is a bastard with overconfidence. System is useless. Can’t find story interesting. Xxd
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Eikke
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Eikke

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Dorival_Sabino
Uma novel que tem mui a oferecer aos seus favoritos e o desenvolvimento é empolgante e te prende a história. Uma novel que tem mui a se apreciar.
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AidoneusCorvinus
It’s really nothing against the book itself it’s just that as a personal thing I really despise novels that revolve around cultivating and the like and the structure of the character is displeasing for example he gets transported to Naruto as a demon literally just appeared and some how he is the patriarch of a clan And the wishes were off too if you disagree with me that’s fine I’m just giving my reasons for this rating it’s really nothing against the author
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syedsaid95
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WangZiHan
I don't know what happened. I'm hooked by the story. Worth to read it. Give it a try. This kind of distructive canon is what i like and what it should be for the term "fan-fic" and in the same time, the story focus on it's MC not the canon MC. I had a good read, so i believe everyone else should too. Have fun.
10mth
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Rouge_Prince1738
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VitorEduardo
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LlMlTLESS
What is this mess? Just the average ****ty Naruto fanfic with the author throwing random **** to make the MC more powerful. Writing Quality: 1/5 Stability of Updates: 4/5 Story Development: 1/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background: 2/5
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DeanSama
It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
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DeanSama
It is a well written story and takes a unique approach to fanfictions. But I don't think it is everyone's cup of tea. It's revolves around a darker side of the story with many manipulations by the MC . The MC is a bit dark and you may not think its worth but once started it will get you hooked... You have to read at least 10 chapters to appreciate it. At first the prologue is a bit confusing but believe me once you start reading more it will be worth it.....
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RaitonMan
Well writen and has great potential I like how ruthless he is keeping his eye on the prize and not caring how he gets to it I only hope that you update more
1yr
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Adandi
There is no real character development for the MC. The other characters of the Naruto verse are known already but the newly introduced side characters get little to no development. The relationships are shallow, I understand the slave marks but even before that, they choose to follow him.. based off of the promises of a 4/5yr old kid... but w/e let’s explain this away that all this happened in the background or that they just had a feeling and they took the gamble or w/e. My real problem is.. way too much is happening at once, like literally jump from one thing to another every chapter or sometimes in the same chapter but it’s all basically fillers.. irrelevant **** that the writer uses to fill chapters just to drop the idea later on. Some of the chapters are just announcements. Hopefully I’m premature on my review and everything comes together in the end but this has the same flaw as almost all fanfic, they write with the assumption that readers are well versed in referenced product. I personally like most the changes made to the universe and the MC’s temperament, it’s very dark and believable, if I fill in some parts with my own creative imagination. Story will be dropped, or eventual rewrite if this level of execution from the writer is continued. Only a matter of time before they realize it’s not good enough. #Dont@Me #BeBetter #WeakToStrongWriter #PotentialForGreatness #WriteSomethingThatGotMeFiendingForNewChapters #MakeFanFicGreatAgain
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swordzero
why too many naruto fanfics. I'm going to wait until mc is done with naruto at least 10-15 chapter into the crossover to give a proper review, for now because of the cover you get 3 star. (HAVE NOT READ THE FANFIC YET WAITING FOR NARUTO ARC TO BE DONE.)
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Dadumdada
This is a very interesting novel it seems to be a attention grabbing and a nonstop must complete all chapters read😳😤😤😤 LOL...I am so going to find myself enjoying my time reading this story that is for sure. 👍😏 Keep the chapters rolling in and we will be reading each and every chapters😎😎😎 Yeppers❗💃💃💃❤♥️♥️🥰🥰🥰
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Mumyum
Ohhhhhhhh very very good novel😁😁😁😁😁😁 it seems to be able to grab my attention and interest at the very least!!! 😳😳😳😳😳 Soooooo you must complete all chapters read😳😤😤😤 LOL...I am so going to find myself enjoying my time reading this story that is for sure.😍😍😍 Keep the coming🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Ruze
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Ruze

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Daoist_Bloodless
Typing this ,because webnovel has character count requirement. I haven't read the story yet but in any case I encourage you and your work keep grinding.
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AssAssInNation
This story is dark as f***, not recommended for people who can't take their favorite childhood Naruto and other characters destroyed to pieces and rebuilt as a slave army. Very unique approach and i enjoyed reading it but definitely not recommended for everyone.
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