Chapter comments on the chapter Back to England - Part 2 of the book Harry Potter and The Grey Side.

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CaCao
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CaCao

It is a pity that this story has been abandoned!😞😖😢
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CaCao
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CaCao

Good chapter! I really like this style a little dark! I advice to continue to create a stable background for the protagonist and develop his own psychology that will help to understand his possible choices and actions based on his character and his experiences! It could help make the story more smooth and enjoyable!
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dracod
Question to the author did you drop? If this is so can you add the dropped to it or if life just update it with hiatus.
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King_P
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King_P

Thanks for the update! 👍👍🏻
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