Reviews of The Exceed System by Vanadhi_Lucia - Webnovel

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Read 5 chapters until it was dropped. Written by, what I guess is an Indian author?, the story is smack full of grammar mistakes, elementary level English, and author notes inserted left and right. When I imagine an ******* author, this is what I can think of as the prime example. Constructive critique to the author; you have some.... novel... ideas. But you should really hire yourself and editor/proofreader in native English - or just write in your native language. I know this story is supposed to be light-hearted, but the lack of professionalism (e.g. writing it on the phone) really puts a lot of people off. Don't get me wrong; it isn't wrong to write novels on the phone, as inspiration comes randomly. But it IS wrong to publish straight from the phone, without having it reviewed first on paper or on the PC, where proper editing can be done - and this story clearly hasn't been edited before publishing. This degrades your story, and Webnovel as a platform.

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