This is an amazing story with a MC that, because of his emotions, managed to gain his inheritance and he did not need to die which was also great. It also has a stable update and good plot. I thank KhanQi for not shying away from swearing, as some people do.
Since I hear one of my titles, I give you five stars, may you reach the Nirvana Stage, trust me it took me 500 years of being imprisoned to reach that ****ty realm, and remember to knock down the Jade Emperor a couple pegs.
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It's a good novel based on sun wukong, pretty interesting to read except the writing it's . . . . really something, sometimes the grammar is right then the next paragraph it's wrong even though it is right before . . ., i'm gonna stop reading this novel since i can't stand the bad grammar, good luck author and please correct the grammar, use editor or something thanks
Is this harem? Cause I'm only atq chapter 18 and I'm only curious though because sometimes I read novels that introduces many girls that have interest to the mc but it's not harem though or polygamy they just gave mc 1 girl and others just became his subordinates
Translation quality: Not bad.
Update: I don't care
Recommend or not: Not sure( I only read till chapter 12)
In conclusion, I hate the word friar!🔥🔥🔥. Also is the mc name Qin feng or Feng qin?
Interesting idea... But.... Plot of every event is totally the same LMAO always goes with MC going somewhere>family got hurt>hero comes late... Happens like 6x yess 6 times same plot, and alot of the story does not make sense. But the idea is indeed fresh monkey king
I initially had high hopes for this story but the more I read the more disappointed I become. I'm trying to give it a chance before I give up completely. A lot of things progress too quickly. The MC and already doing things that make no sense. The grammar doesn't flow decently. Hopefully an editor can correct the beginning chapters soon. As I write this I am starting chapter 6.
Mehhhhhhh, The amount if 5 star ratings for this quality of writing is surprising. This needs to be professionally edited, otherwise it appears to he done by a middle schooler. The text seems like a different variation of english.
Beginning was very interesting I liked it very much but after reading almost 300 chapters the story just gets dumber and dumber mc can literally create hundreds of clones but can even create one to protect her sister then there are sooo many side chicks i dont care about harem but damn this gets on my nerves i cant even remember the initial plot anymore i know that the author is newbie but I gotta say what I need to say or im gonna get crazy I recommend reading the first 100 chapters then just move on with other novels.
Too bad, its gone bad, i can tolerate thebad writing because its not edited, and the wrong grammars and wrong wordings to describe things, it has a good premise and good potential, but wasted on REPETITIVE rescue plot, its gone so bad that even a badass mc is useless, is he a representation of how the author an idiot? Can't he even Protect his own people? Or think logically? Sigh. Too many rescues, too many ambush on his love ones, and repetitive villains. It sucks
The title sound badass but the novel a let down the MC is stupid always do stuff that put his family in dangerous and don't take advantage of the girl with the holy body or whatever to increase his strength.
The chapters haven't been rewritten despite the plot being full of holes, mc being a complete idiot because of someone is the opposite gender, very inconsistent mc. Overall this is rated way too high, a three star at most due to it being written well with no or not many grammatical errors. It might be better in later chapters but that doesn't matter if you can't stomach the earlier ones which are painful to read.