Grammar is lacking, please either your verbs or find an editor. Also, about grammar as well, please use appropriate phase structures, it sound like it was machine translated.
hmmm refreshing idea of novel
thanks author and keep writing, ππππππππππππππππππππππ₯π₯π₯π₯ππππππ₯π₯π₯ππππ₯πππ₯
If your mind in stress right now you can choose this story to read,it make your mind relax for a moment,that what you need,have a try you will not have a loose anything.
π₯°ππthis fun story to read .it the right story to read after you read the sad novel because this story will make you as happy as I do right now.
the story was pretty good . but in the middle i was confused because little detailing was missing and except that the plotline, the characters and everything was good.
The story very entertaining. You wont get bored raeding as the story goes on.since it had a twist that the fl dont know whats gonna happen especialy when she is the author of it.:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
I will just say ...a very entertaining read.
Imagine that the creator of the story stuck in her own story...and it didn't go as she had written overall. The characters have their own lives... Following the writer, our Myra, is fun...the journey is fulfilling with transmigration to ancient world created heroine, the romance, the action, handsome male leads, strong female leads, surprise jokes and yes.. Magic...yes Falling In Love With Male Lead is full package..:D
Well so far it got me intrigued. The story is still in its early stage... However, i hope that as it progress it can still capture my interest. Thank you author for the story..
BtsMeenakshi