Lots of male terms being used for girls...might want to fix that since it will become a bad habit if you do not use proper female terms for you female characters like she/her instead of him/he/his like what was used in this chapter
I am a seasoned otaku 29 years old.
I felt that your character power up is too fast and somehow its look like mary sue syndrome for me.
I have my fun thanks.
I like your product but i guess there are no more challenge as everyone other than mc are weak and ignisificant