Chapter comments on the chapter Final decision about this novel! of the book Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

I actually like how the story started but when it got to the part of oc becoming adopted it felt like it's lost its direction and move in a way that contradict the story so I would love to still have the same beginning just fix the small details and the Fack that he had a nother self a demon side I like it but theirs not much on to actually make sense of it I say it should have gone a little more in-depth in it as it could of been some great filler in the story

Would he still be a reincarnated? System? Fate/elements?

As somebody who enjoys this story I like this idea of yours However I'm a little concerned as other fanfics I've read have risen one continuous thought Will the MC have any sufficient weaknesses to balance out the strengths

How about a true pendragon while be able to summon all fate servants of camelot as well as jeanne d acr and saint martha ( vote for artoria,modred,jeanne,mash and martha for harem )

Well then wonder what the name is gonna be well anyway im happy as long as he does not remove this one i quite enjoyed it after all

U should make kingdom harem sensei because our mc is dragon and dragon have big pride and big boost with all his wife ,, so to the point get all woman to our mc harem and all milf :v ,, ( btw don't make like mc can go to future him because that will male headche and blank in story for my thinking )

no keep it going, its better that way otherwise it will be boring these ''unnecessary elements'' are important to make the story more exciting

Man i think this novel is good as he is now. The part of the higher worlds or real parents from another world make the plot to have Mysterious side because it never has fully explained and it also Expands understanding both the story and the character and how it eventually transitions into another anime.

Make the mc dragonborn And please keep the fate element And keep lavinia as pairing

You should make main characters new dragon body be of the same kind as Great Red or Ophis but he just woke up or something or maybe great red is his father or something but before you say something about how those two are too OP those two weren’t just born that way they had to slowly gain that strength and the title of God. So another words make him a true primordial dragon from birth. Oh and don’t forget that the devil world has some dragons as well such as Tannin

Men, just do it!! As long as it's not another revival of Issei, it's all good frankly Isei's rebirths have me up to the ball, they have no grace.

Can't wait for it author-san

Dragon appearance of Acnology and powers for the MC (translated from google translator)

What a nice surprise, and me who did a farewell speech in last chapter now feel like a fool...

I'm just happy u didn't completely stop it cuz we don't have many fate based stories and this one was pretty good!

Seems like a good idea to restart and tweak it but will you keep the mysterious higher powers and who will his parents be I loved that part about this novel it kept the story interesting for me

let's just get it right away, banging shuuri XD

I approved but toi are stil have To place fate caracteur in thé novel

The harem must remain the same

I liked the whole higher world and parent aspect, it made it different than the other dxd fanfic and was certainly creative and interest but if abandoning it means to continue then continue however I don’t see the point in restarting if it will be rewriting a lot of what you did before