Reviews of Broke: A Clone Wars Tale (Star Wars) by Reis123 - Webnovel

Well, it's me, the author, again. First of all, I want to say that this is the second review I did of my novel, but, considering that the first one was when the novel had only one chapter, and I didn't know how to write, or, actually, I didn't know anything at all. So, I will soon delete the first review I did, and leave only this one. Now that we got that out of the way, let's talk about the novel. The first thirty, maybe forty chapters are from when I had just started writing, and had no idea how to do it, at least not well. I plan to, after the story is finished, revisit those chapters, correct grammar, and expand them to match the ones after fifty or so. So, I ask you all to give the novel a chance, even if it doesn't seem exactly awesome at the start. Please remember I am I'm not a native English speaker, although I have made up for that, and started correcting my grammar mistakes as soon as I realized I really liked to write, and I didn't want the novel to be unreadable Trash. Also important, although I tried to make things as similar to the original lore of Star Wars and Clone Wars, some things are different. It is a fan-fic after all. Lastly, I, as the author, am always open to suggestions and ideas, and, unless you are being extremely rude for no reason (it never happened, but who knows), I will always accept those comments, although I might not follow what you, as the reader, wants. I think that is all, so, thanks for reading until here, and I hope you enjoy the novel!

It’s good...... and I didn’t cry I swear. TBH I don’t see why you wouldn’t read it even if your only a little interested in Star Wars. Completely pass free as its a fanfiction so I just don’t see anyone regretting reading this. + The author is a top lad so yeah.... now all you have to do is read it. 🙂

Needs work on spelling and grammar but otherwise great story!

Ce roman est un grand roman,il retrace la guerre des clones comme elle devrait être, du point de vue d'un clone. Si il devait y choisir une fanfic du point de vue d'un clone c'est celle-ci que je prendrait,elle m'a fait être fascinée,ému,rire,pleurer,ect... tout ce qu'un bon roman devrait être. Bref, je vous recommande de le lire. Merci à l'auteur. 🙏😁

Best Star Wars novel by far, I hope someday someone can write a similar new story

Legendary, very very good. It is the essence of the series and brings characters to light beautifully. I couldn’t have had a better read.

I haven’t ever written a review but I recently came across this story and I felt the need to finally write one for just how good it was one of the best Star Wars fanfics out there

This was the best star wars fanfic i ever read. Give it a try its awesome.

Very good

it's by far the best star wars novel on webnovel and definitely in the top 10 stories I read on this app.

I rarely ever even bother to write a review and when I do write one it is because it is well deserved. I love star wars the clone wars, it was my 3rd fav show during my childhood. I really appreciate that the author decided to do a clone protagonist who doesn’t have any special abilities like the force. This fanfic doesn’t add any other unnecessary elements like love. After all the protagonist is a clone. I also admit that throughout the story I cried like 3 times. I can’t remember the last time a novel of any kind made me cry. If you see this i’d really recommend that you read this fanfic. It is a masterpiece and something I would happily reread.

Don't think I ever made a review for this novel when I finished this. It's a good fanfic for sure ...................................................................

By far the best fanfic I think I have ever come across for almost a year I refused to read it because it’s a star wars story with a clone as the main character but it was absolutely brilliant. The end has me crying though

this is a good book I recommend anyone who likes star wars to read this book filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler

This was one of the best fanfics of Star wars that i have read easy the Best Star wars story in the platform..........................................

I can say, without a dubt this is the best fanfic I ever read, it's just extremely good, the story the Detail, it's even really logical at some point, it's just magnificient, I love it

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I loved it, it is a nice story and has everything I want like an pretty strong mc and is emotional near the end after reading this for the second or third time.

I honestly don't know what to say this is an amazing novel and honestly I wish it there was more of it but it was a good ending that's for dang sure and I just don't know what to say it was very influential in my life because it helped me get over my depression it was really enjoyable now it's over I'm going to try and find a new one but this one will never get replaced in my heart it was an amazing novel and I hope you know that thanks Dageer, Brain, Cell, Three-Four, Metal, Dab, and

This is definitely one of the best stories on this site, or any site for that matter - it has all the hallmarks of a good story: good quality of writing, interesting and varied characters, solid character development and much more. It explores the relationships between its characters, following the tale of a group of OC clones in the star wars universe and their relationships with both Canon and OC characters. The plot is not particularly complex if you know star wars lore, primarily from the prequels and the clone wars series, with a few cameos from the original trilogy, Rogue One, Rebels, the Republic Commando games and the Jedi: Fallen Order game, but it explores elements that we only really get to see in the Clone Wars themselves, such as what it really means to be a clone and the physical and psychological turmoil that they all go through, with all their highs and lows, their friendships and brotherhood, and their hatreds and revenge. The plot line is solid, with logical actions and reactions by the cast and explores the deeper, less apparent consequences of some choices and events from the movies, games and I believe some comics, without merely being a rehash of old material. Also, it's a clone-centric story, which serves to make it an even rarer gem. The story keeps you teetering on the edge, never knowing what is going to happen to the characters, how they are going to get out of a tight spot or if that will be their last fight. There are a few plot twists that have proven most entertaining, but, much like the timeline it is set in, the place where the novel truly shines is its apex, in an ending which has sealed its place among my favourite reads ever - it is unpredictable in its predictability, because the story follows Canon events to a T, but it forges its very own plot line and, although you may already know the way events are going to go for the overall galaxy and be capable of seeing certain events coming, you keep hoping for a happy ending in a tale that, by its very premise, is bound to have none; yet at the end of its crescendo, in its final, heartwrenching moment, there is that one spark of hope and victory that brings a bittersweet smile among all your tears. Perfection 👌🏻

It was EMOTIONAL, HAD LOTS OF ACTION SCENES, and importantly it had FAMILY, it made me cry, and there are very few that could make me cry reading a novel or fanfiction.

¿Romance, harem, something? .......... ........................... .............................................. ............................................................

Best Star Wars novel on this site, sad seeing it end but look forward to what the writer does next. Really loved seeing the perspective of a clone, very well done. 😃😃😃😃👍👍👍

To be honest I didn't any hope for good star wars fanfic until I found this hidden gem. Star Wars has many concepts which can be used as the base of story. However sadly most of them are trash which are kinda wish fulfillment idiotic story driven where as a avid fan of star wars you found it to be an eyesore. This is the first star wars fanfic which gives us the viewpoint of a common clone soldier entering the conflict of clone wars. Author explained that he was an ******* writer but gave us readers a wholesome package of emotions and a great storytelling. Dageer at first sounds like your an average same clone like his brothers in the clone army. However his character development his squad the Hell squad and 303 battalion under Ima Gun Di gave us many fascinating stories about the war from the viewpoint of a soldier. Story doesn't feel like boring at any point as it doesn't follows cliches or bullshiting out anything. The author had done his work well in understanding clone wars and honestly it kind of feels like an extended series of clone wars from just reading. If you're are a star wars lover definitely go for it. Give your love to author and his wonderful story.

awesome, compelling and defenetly worthy of the praise , really awesome read for starwars fans and non fans , the character building is done beautifully and the action scenes get better and better , in conclusion Disney should make a show about it

best d*mn fanfic I've ever read hope to see such a great work again from you author.... maybe a mandalorian as MC and I'd love to see a proper romance with Ahsoka and no harem well you're decision in the end

What a great novel, even though it is finished it is one of the best stories on Webnovel and i can not recommend it enough. The author is also part of the story through the way he interacts with his readers and fixes any mistakes he makes, you should also read his new novel. goodbye 👋

Incrível , primeiro autor BR que vejo escrevendo tão bem . .... ........................................................................................................................................ ..........................................................................

hello just some random reader passing by, this story is one of my favourited story the author don't change too much of the real SW storyline (which i liked it) because some of the other fan-fic change 360⁰ of the storyline.Anyways thanks author for this masterpiece story

Out of all the fanfics on webnovel this is by far my favorite and one of the best wriiten while also being consistent and yes I did cry. If you like Star Wars you should definitely give this a read.

Best novel I have ever read aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaHvkcjfjd HD udbsjdjrndjdhfhdjzjdndkxjdjfjdndjdjdjdjdjsjsnejzjsjenfjdbdbdjdnejdndndnfnf I have to have at least 140 characters