I personally like comedy so if you like to laugh yourself to death give this a read. 10/10 recommend π π π π
really wish the author writes would have continued the story.
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I really read a few chapters, but I find the story very funny and even having a bad critical sense I think I need to write something. The plot is insightful and the characters are charismatic, I really want to see how it goes when there are more players.
(Yes, I know, my criticism is a disaster, but hey, I never denied that I have a potato opinion)
this book is kind of good and it's rare to see a dungeon lord make his dungeon as a virtual game and it's a new genre for me , dungeon lord x VR game ?
Okay so I took a try at reading this because of the good reviews on here but this story is so hard to like. First a have problem with the background which is super vague at the beginning and doesnβt really get any better latter on. Second the main character a total bore. The system attached to the main character is more interesting. And talking of characters their is really no one interesting to follow in this story. Everyone is described so vaguely that I can barely follow who is who. The story development is ok but that really all I can it. So all in all itβs a slow read that not really worth investing in.
βA reader lives a thousand lives before he dies . . . The man who never reads lives only one.β β George R.R. Martin
βReading is essential for those who seek to rise above the ordinary.β β Jim Rohn
Hmmmmm... A fairly good novel it has the best character design I've ever seen the story is somehow unique and original the writing quality is one of a top notch intermidiare (after my experience in rating novels) I STRONGLY recomand reading it .
Read it without logging in throughout a few days. It was a refreshing and sweet read. I definitely encourage people to try it.
You easily get attached to the characters. I'm a fan of BurningChestHair personnally...
I've read up to chapter 549. The story so far is entertaining. You have epic battles, a smart MC and an interesting plot that unfolds over time. However, there is a few deal breakers. There is a disgusting amount of misunderstandings in this fic. It gets to the point that its so unbelievable that it becomes another form of plot armor.
This is a great book and you will fall in love with it after you read a few chapters. the character development is nice and the humorous is pretty good. but all I ask if for is a petition for a second book, this book is that good. you feel empty when you finish it, it doesn't just add up and at the end of the day you will want a book 2.
Hi ,
This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your βGamers of the Underworld β, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com
, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.
It was a great pleasure to meet your story.
Sincerely
Tynan
Very good read, i won't say it was perfect since it had it's meh parts, but overall i enjoyed what i read and can easily recommend to others this novel.
Although the ending felt a little rushed the overall story was very good and unique. I endorse this novel. It is not a very long novel which is a good thing if you are looking for something with closure.
It's not your classical Dungeon Master gene, or whatever you want to call it. It has a lot of unique elements and a lot of comedy. Of course, it has a few problems. For me the biggest complaint is a lot of unrealistic things happen, but considering other things it's okay. I'm not here to write a full review just to recommend the book, nor am I good at writing them, so if you want something more detailed look elsewhere Id highly recommends though.
This story is a very slow burn, other than that the story is excellent in every way and I have no complaints. Unfortunately I didnβt finish the story, however the issue was with me not the story itself.
another good novel get dropped by original author since he decide to write another novel.
i'm not gonna explain in detail why i give this story a high rate since other people already did it but atleast you should know that this story have a good character development including crazy yet hilarious name, a proper world building with the Underworld undergoes basically an Industrial Age unlike the surface world Human who's still stuck at Feudal Age.
funny thing is the Underworld denizen ironically were more peaceful than the Human backed by Light God / Knowledge God who constantly wage war between themself.
Lhyrax