Hi. I like how it started. You are very good conveying emotions. I almost can feel the lump in the throat she must have feeling all the time.
Also, there's mutual attraction, so it's a good start. 😊
Will be around, for sure.
It's a fabulous and amazing start! In some novels, The POV contains a lot of mistakes and this one I just amazing! Loving the start already! Hoping to read more and good! ❤❤❤
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