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nait993
the story sounds good so far and the female turns male is interesting.
but it was in cest again what is boring because too much novels have that.
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Pyoug
Guys, please do not bother yourself with this. It literally goes downhill so fucking bad.
The female mc gets raped by a bunch of aliens for a month, please save yourself brain cells and move on.
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_Miyasaka
Honestly not sure about this one.
It all seemed like an everyday normal smutty system novel, lots of ***, "Fuc* X times" quest, consensual r*pe skills, the classic skill steal, a sprinkle of ******, and with a gender bender skill as a bonus.
Then chapter 17 suddenly drops down. It completely changes the tone, setting, and pace of the story. I'm still unsure whether I like it or not.
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The overall writing is great but updates are unstable. The last one was 15 days ago as the day of writing, 13/Nov/2020.
Definitely worth a try tho.
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Gnaipafe
Your an excellent writter. I'm not done reading but I'm too excited to make a review, as excited to read more of it. Please keep updating, for the sake of your readers.
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Lami274
I really like the plot! The story has the potential to keep the readers hooked! I really like the way you presented the characters and background world! Good job author!
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madskie00017
Wow! This is definitely Fun. Spoiler! this is an erotic story. Amazing story and funny!
Though, I recommend this only to 18 and above readers. This is a worth it read for me. I am blushing at some chapter as I read it.
Good work!
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bibiyenini
The modern-day fifty shades are finally here again! Erotic readers should read this all! Well, it's not really that but it's fantasy mixed with a romance novel that will surely give you the vibes!
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David_Smith_4790
I love it and i have to say keep up the good work ** you have
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ProfessorofCulture
Update more, really love this novel. It's as if it was made for me. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Azathoth_PlotGod
Is this still ongoing? Or is the author dead? You could at least tell us it's dropped if you're alive. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Good story btw, it fits my tastes perfectly! Hope you pick it up again... If you are still breathing, that is.
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xXHadesXx
Great book, I have only good thoughts about the story keep up the good work, hope to see new updates coming out soon. Thank you for your work.
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Sommerscave
This book is amazing ๐ This book is amazing ๐ This book is amazing ๐ This book is amazing ๐ This book is amazing ๐ This book is amazing ๐ Thanks for the hard work ๐
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TUPROXX
I like how the protagonist is and how the story unfolds. If you like sex and gender bender then this is your novel. The low point is the updates but if you have patience then better. (My English is bad because it is not my original language)
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Ibadi_Demirci
O kadar รงok iyi olduฤunu dรผลรผnmรผyorum tabi kadฤฑn baล rolde olmayฤฑ seven okuyucular iรงin mรผkemmel bir kitaptฤฑr ama kalan bรถlรผmรผde versen seviniriz
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Dao_of_tiddie
Great! Fits in perfectly with my fetishes ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ฅต๐๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฆ
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zZCandyZz
Thk for updating.
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter...
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jeanpierregerardo
good.
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