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Sophie_Duken
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Christine_Leo_2212
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soulla
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i_dont_know_if_he
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SamarasBox
๐Ÿ™Œ Mad respect cuz keep doing your thing story is ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ”ฅ just need some characters designs and a world background but overall story has a lot of potential.
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Kasaix
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๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
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Henrique_Paiao
Exp ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿค๐Ÿ˜บ๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿ‘ฆ๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿค๐Ÿ˜บ๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿค๐Ÿ‘ง๐Ÿค๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜€โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜€ โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜€
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Kevin_Rodriquez
Good story ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„
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Jixyakku
Honestly this book is really good, has amazing potential and just hits the spot on some of my desires when imagining this genre. I hope that at some point you will go back and edit your work in the early chapters because before chapter 300 it takes an incredible amount of effort to push through the pain of the grammar and flow of the story to get that far. Otherwise, an amazing story and with a few touch ups could have a huge fanbase unfortunately those early chapters completely stonewall general readers. Good Luck with your work in the future.
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Kevin_Rodriquez
Great story. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿณ๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿณ๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿณ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿก๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿก๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿก๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ๐Ÿก๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿก๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ‡ฏ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ‡ฏ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ’ฉ๐Ÿ‡ฐ๐Ÿ‡ท๐Ÿ˜ฒ
4yr
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Heather_Powell_7217
๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€
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Kevin_Rodriquez
Very good๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€love the fights in different realms this story has lots of potential need to fix the early chapters
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Carla_Ann_Powell
Great story. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
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martialgod1125
Good story intriguing has lots of potential just need to go back and fix all of the early chapters looking forward to see the completed story good luck๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Carla_Ann_Powell
Awesome book. ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜†โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
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Insane_Pumpkin
I read few chapters at this looks like a great novel in need of a great editor. Story is great but gramar is from a nightmare like place so author please get a editor for this novel and with his help do a rewrite it would make this novel get 10 times the readers it has now.
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Dragon5162
Grammer is crap, pure utter crap!!!!! Whoever wrote should seriously look up some programs to help at the very least. I honestly cant even get past the first chapter without just giving up on this novel.
4yr
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SoBreez1
Pretty good but not the best. (Wuhsndudhdbfbdufbfbfjgighfbfbdhdhfbfbfhfufbfbdhdhrbrbrjfjfhfhfbfhfhfhfbfbfhfhfrbdhxhxvdvdhdjdnrbfhdhdhdbdhdhdh)
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Feebling
The story is interesting and has a lot of potential, yet I've decided to drop it since the Grammar is seriously REALLY BAD. Shame. - Writing quality 1 star.
4yr
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japprentice
It was empty. I couldn't stop myself.๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ. The syno**is didn't attract me. It's not just my cup of tea. But it doesn't mean others should not read it. Try and You might be surprised, who knows. So ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” I have nothing more ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…
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