Reviews of The Boy in the All-Girls' Chat Group by LazyTiany - Webnovel

Great story, waiting for next chapter :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

The story starts slow but when you start reading you will found yourself wanting more. Even though I cannot say that this is addicting but I really want to read more.

Though I don't have to I still want to give my story a review and this is the most honest I can get. Hey! Even though I have to be honest I still have to be confident with my work, I mean, I worked hard writing it so it is only natural. So here's a heads up for my readers and the future readers. [1] Obviously, it's a harem so I am warning those that are harem haters or those that don't really like harem to be aware. Though I promise you guys that it would be natural or as logical as I can but I will possibly make some mistake so please spare me from harsh criticism. [2] I will be making the MC not too OP but at the same time, he will get strong very fast and will have a lot of luck and what I mean by a lot is a lot. If you know the MC of Motto to Love Ru cause I forgot his name but we all know that he would be always in perverted situations. So my MC will also have that same kind of luck but not in a perverted way. [3] There is a system but it does not have an AI which can respond or have any feelings. It would also not control the MC with the quest as the MC will have the right to reject it in the future. [4] I am not really a good writer so I expect you guys to be nice to me when I make a mistake. Please don't leave any harsh criticism like telling me to stop writing or something similar as that would lower my confidence in writing and end up ending this novel. I can accept criticism as long as it is reasonable and it is my wrong but if it ends up being just a troll then I will try my best not to be discouraged. [5] Lastly, I am only writing as I go so there is no definite plot so any suggestions are much appreciated. I know that having no plan in advance will lead a story to its doom but please help me when I do get in trouble. I am still a beginner so I have not much experience in writing.