Its medicore.
Mc iritate me so much ...
Autor make him look weak. And he was.. but all the time he lose battle and when he was about to die his hiden power destroy enemy....
And his charakter...
He was bullied and when he got magic he new guy he forget past and accept everything like normal magic ok new guys ok mehhh....
He complett another person..
I love the story so far❗♥️ I am so hooked right from the start😝 it really is a fun and entertaining read all the way❗❗❗👍 thx for uploading the story here😇 please more soon😳
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I truly believe I am going to enjoy this novel👍🤗👍👍🤗 🤞
It really does seem like something worth reading so I am recommending to .......... READ READ READ❗❗❗❗❗
4SUzrE❗❗👍🤞🤞 I promise lol😂
Attractive summary..hmmmm...its got my attention😳😳
Veery very very much into reading this novel🤨
😈 HAH!😇 4 sure i'll give this novel a good try I mean I have been looking for a good story. I think this is a novel I will find to be a good read in the end right? RIGHT❗🤞🤞🥰heehee
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OHOHOHOHOH! THIS IS JUST... THIS. EVERYTHING IS KINDA... HMMM... WHAT'S THIS..? OH! A SHIT... A SHIT IN THE MC EH? OH IT'S NICE AND CUTE EVEN THOUGH IT'S SHIT...
well didn't read it and i wont cause of the wimpy beginner Japanese type guy.. to me being weak doesn't mean you have to be a wimpy or annoying type of MC. Most MC always start weak anyway.
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while slow it is by far one of the best chat group stories i have read love your work keep it up :) only thing i could hope for is a faster realease but as a writer myself understand both how hard and potentialy unhealthy that is but none the less love you work :)
Rated low simply for grammar and first person writing. I did this and I did that do not make for an interesting story to read. I struggled to read even the first page
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Alright, Author here. I know most of you think this novel is a rip-off of Cultivation Chat Group. Well, to be informed, this novel was in the contest with the theme chat group. And this is the result of that. And please, I know you don't like weak MC but understand that the MC is never a magician to begin with, and does not have any experience becoming one so how could I explain him being able to defeat enemies easily? Cut him some slack because I can't just let him go to a strong individual with some cheat powers because the story would go boring too easily.
As for the world-building, I didn't bother explaining where he was located or the current situation because it was set in modern Japan. Nothing to explain too much and I don't bother emphasize it too much since it will just be stocking words with only description of the place and I know many of you hate that.
As for the chat group, its a necessary part of the story and it would be one of the key points in the future. As for goals of the MC, it's not yet decided so please wait for a bit. As for the grammar, I know I have mistakes here and there and I know that because I am not a Native English speaker so please tolerate it a bit and if there are mistakes, kindly point it to me. And as always, thank you for reading.
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The grammar is a little poor yet tolerable, they say a few things on what the character looks like, for world building they say the they building yet never go over the background. For people who have never been there it's hard to picture the surroundings with little detail about it. Other than that the MC has no goals let alone a end goal.
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