Chapter comments on the chapter Why was his love story incomplete? of the book Handsome CEO'S Bewitching wife

Get an editor please....it makes it so hard to read your story. The expression is so awkward; 'a motto of his life' wtf...don't you mean life motto? There's so many unnecessary words. I wouldn't read further after the free chapters and actually spend spirit stones...

OMG!!I didn't expected that!he fell in love with a 9 yeqr old girl and that intense? WOW as in WOW.... Why do i feel like this Mian girl is Xinmie?...😉

I really like this ML

Finally a male lead who does not just drink away his sorrow but he actually cried I'm touched thanks author I'm happy for the change 😊

Wow, to love someone from such a young age! People say I'm crazy for being with my man since I was 15! Wow! so sweet and pure tho. I can't believe the woman lied like she did. luckily he found out before committing to her.

I’m so touched by chen’s emotions. Love this story so far great work author 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

The plot isn't bad but the writing definitely need some work . It's quite rough around the edges but this is something where you can get better with practice and time. I'm still intrigued by where this is going so I'll continue for now.

😭😭😭mian where are you??? Moan, your making a grown man cry. Where are you??

Pretty hard to imagine..

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heartbreaking

Just so you know "cum" is English slang for an orgasm or for the semen/fluid. I'm pretty sure you meant to say assistant 'come' secretary... You might need to think about using an editor, there are quite a few grammatical errors

I love the ML

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Plot from me his Mian is the FL. FL was lost first and was in orphanage for some time before her parents took back. That's why her bother take care of her so much and whole family never wants to see her sad!!!!! 😎

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