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AsianLadyBoy
*He is not the only one that is from the future*
i know that this one thing kills any novel for people so that way you know before you start reading.
*Some Spoilers ahead*
The MC is transmigrated in to the body of a 9year old boy from the past, not his own body. His situation is not so good because his moms a piece of sh*t and his dad is also a piece of sh*t. I don't know why but he starts to try and help his mother out of the situation even though he hates her for what she has done to him. I would understand if she was a good mother to him but she was not.
He makes allot of decisions that makes no sense, he's not a kid. His body is, but his mind is not. So you would think he would make clearer decisions, but he does not.
The whole, hes not the only person from the future is something that I don't like, I was okay with there being one other person from the future that he knows. And i was excited to see what both of them will do to change the future for the better. But then you decided to add a f*cking Organization that stops people that are from the future, from changing the timeline.
At that point I knew that it was not what I expected from reading the synopsis. As well as knowing that this novel will be filled with people from the future with allot of forced drama.
If you like transmigration story's about a male MC and a female MC making quick and rash decisions, while it blows up in there face later. Then them not being able to do what they wanted to do, like change the future for the better. Because theirs a secret organization that wont allow them to, because if they do, they will kill them. Then more then likely weird forced dramatic situations while throwing in more people from the future to stir up more drama.
Then this novel is for you.
Its not something i like but you may.
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no_nope
I started to read this comic because of an ad on Instagram and I'm glad I decided to, because this story grabbed my attention with the fist page I had be a while since I have read a story like this one.
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TurtleManiacc
very interesting novel hope u dont drop it very interesting novel hope u dont drop it very interesting novel hope u dont drop itvery interesting novel hope u dont drop it very interesting novel hope u dont drop it
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Sorata_Shiina
The story is good and eye catching. It also tells us the possibility of changing our own future if we just work hard enough. The story also tells how life is hard and that the world is unfair but under those negative effect there's always a positive one. Like a friend who won't betray you or people to help you with you're life. Long story Short the main character is the same as us struggling and fighting for his life and those around him who he values.
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CocoaButter
This novel had the great potential but unfortunately despite the amazing writing the main character lacks common sense. For example his family situation, they're not his real parents so he can reasonably call the police for the abuse the body he transmigrated to suffered. But no suddenly there is forgiveness and strange compassion for strangers who beat him.
That's one separate matter, the other is he doesnt act like his mental age you would think, he makes childish mistakes. Also has unrealistic expectations. Plus the author seems to forget that the mc age is 9, how can he sign papers without a guardian consent. Last thing I was frustrated with is he cannot even handle a little girl's enquiries. He seems threatened, it's bizarre. The writing is incredible but the plot and main character has lots of issues.
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hans02
This is one of the better stories here but every other chapter there is always something annoying me. Be it the fact that a child of his age can survive that horrendous assault and even stand on the next day, random people at a shop letting a 9 year old who's half dead working a whole day, taking him seriously and betting money on a horce race in his stead of calling the ambulance, the fact that a 9 year old can legally sign documents (I don't know much about other countries laws though) or maybe the fact that he can just live with the family of his friends without the slightest complication. Furthermore the characters take him way too seriously after meeting him for one day.
I'm still at chapter 9 but there is already much to criticize, but this story has much potential (because imo everyone at some point thought about how easy life would be if one could travel back in time and avoid the mistakes one did while growing up).
I just hope that the author improves his story over time.
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Omin
I think this story has a lot of ponteual but personally its not my cup of tea!!! Im not saying its bad but i fell like its moving a little to fast and that theirs a lot of info missing that could have ben more helpful if placed in the right parts! LET ME SAY THIS I WOULD HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TGIS STORY TO FREINDS its just not for me!!! So keep at it i cant wait for the finale results!๐ค๐๐
Ps. Sorry if some words are misspelled!!!
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JStyles
This could have been a great story but the author made it garbage.His father almost killed him and his mother, he instead of calling police like a sane person ran away like a bitcch and started telling ppl about future and started placing bets.He knew his father could kill his mother at any time but that **** ran away
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Darkdelusion
From an objective view, this is a well-written novel with proper pacing and development. Even the writing is fluid with proper transition (a rarity in most webnovel). Similarly, characters are relatively believable and MC has moments of bad decision.
As such, I would say that this is a novel I can recommend and give high ratings to.
Nonetheless, from a personal point of view, I find myself at crossroads in chapter 8. To be precise, at the concept of preservationists.
Not the fault of plot or anything (it is still good), but my own haste(and personal taste). The concept reminded me of a standard 'kindle book'. I was instead expecting a similar direction to first 7 chapters (before the 'great reveal' and 'grand escape').
All in all, it is a great book. I would recommend it to others, though it is not my taste.
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Redx2o
Good work on the book oh and can u add all the friends Sean meets on the cover of the book I would love to see what they look like to get a better picture
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Lazy_dude
Wow just wow๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎi just hope author can update more often!don't need to rush tho,quality is better then quantity๐คง๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
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Redx2o
This book is so Interesting it make me feel sad, happy and so much more author please keep going with this book I enjoy reading this book and reading what will happen next in this story of Iโm nine again
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Patience_Mfenqa
What a great story the plot is amazing and the character building is great I'm hoping more of this great story in the future keep up the good work
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photographer_life
The start of the story was a basic but the story as it progresses way very good and I was hooked in seconds. Can't wait for the next up date
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Lann_Robshaw
Omg amazing ๐๐ I fell in love straight away with the first chapter. And the style of writing is amazing. I will 100% be recommending this to my friends.
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snowy_Vegito
I really love the story for someone who donโt like chapter books๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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WELDAN
One of my best and now favorite novel so far. The author's way of writing with a informative word's perspective intrested me.&hhhjsjsbdjwnfbbwbebdbwnrbebnejehejjwhjajasbsh shbsbshsjdbsjbdjsjsjsbsbsbbsnsjsjsjshshhshshshshshhshshshshshshshshshhshshshshshdhdhhdhdhdhshshshshhshshshshshhshshshs
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TrialStorys
This novel is amazing. I have had a blast reading it. The hook is great including the development of the story. I also love the general concept of waking up in a younger body back in time. This novel has also really helped me realize how much my own is lacking.
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Minsona
I really do like how this novel is going as of chapter 5. The pacing is good, good grammar, and itโs a nice plot that I can get behind. Really look forward to where this story will end up going later on.
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random1900
I loved the characters. Well hate them, but they are well written nonetheless. The realism is great, and I would write more but I suck at writing unlike the author.
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Harris_Pilltown
I really like my own book, haha. But seriously, I hope you guys enjoy it and give it a good read! I'm hoping to release chapters as fast as I can but I want to make sure I take enough time that the story is great and not rushed.
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Sage_Insanity
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More_Sugar_Please
Holy **** the first chapter was just wow. The only thing that was missing was a kid in the corner yelling, โWORLD STAR!!!!!!โ when the fight scene happened.
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Emma_Linton
Keen to find out what happens next. Hooked on this already. Emotionally raw and gripping. I was immersed. Interesting take on the isekai genre.
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