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PsyberRose
Part of a review swap and at time of reading, there were only 2 chapters.
Hard to truly give a proper review with only two chapters, but here goes!
Writing Quality: English isn't my first language so minor grammatical errors aren't really seen by me. I did see some in here though, but it didn't spoil the overall reading and smooth flow, so it's okay for me.
Stability of Updates : Too early to tell. 5* on good faith
Story Development /Character Design /World Background: Again, too little to really tell but I can say this. It has potential. Even with only two chapters, it's light and interesting enough to grasp my attention. It stays in the library for me to see how it progresses.
All the best Author and keep on writing. (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
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I_Eat_Pussies
Story is there.. just needs more polishing..
Just keep updating... All i need is stable updates and an English that I can understand.. Keep on updating don't mind the negative comments, you'll get better eventually
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Mavislin11
A huge info dump on the first chapter. But it is still way too early to determine how this will go. The story idea is there, just needs some polishing for the writing quality.
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AlmightyKnight
Ah cheeky author here.. writing a review on my own Novel..
Please be more forgiving mates.. haha :D :)
Sypnosis:
Hong, Hong, honggg!!
A young man from earth got into an accident and reincarnated to a cultivation world.
Snow Clan, one of the strongest and respected family in the Night Empire have fallen due to the head of the family dying unto the claws of the magical beast. But are the magical beast really the one who killed the family head?
Nite Snow the young master of the Snow Clan is the only remaining direct descendant of the family, got beaten to death but the young man from earth occupied his body as he died.
"I'll take revenge for you my brother as a payment for me occupying your body, you can rest in peace now."
Carrying a mysterious stone, follow Nite as he rise as the Ruler of the Night.
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