First off, you should cut down on the whole complaining thing or at least make him do it in his own thoughts and not yell it out. Secondly, having a status screen is immensely helpful( seeing your improvements is so much fun and satisfying). Thirdly, can other people even see the stand? I mean in the Jojo series only stand users can see stand. And finally, since you name your MC Joshep, you need to include the infamous Joestar secret technique and the whole " your next is going to be:... " since it was awesome.
I have not watched or read jojo's adventure. Please make this fanfic awesome enough to actually make me want to read/watch it. Also thanks for chapter xD
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