Reviews of FORGIVE ME ,MY LOVE by GALAXIANA - Webnovel

What ungrateful and bastard protagonist. Narcissus. This follows from Synopsis. But psimy what will happen next. For some reason, schoolchildren write great novels, fiction, but as they enter the university ... they completely forget about their passion for writing and remember it already when they become young specialists))) - offtopic. It seems unnecessary detailed information about the physiological cycles ... what is it for? Somehow it will be played up in the future? Or is it like a gun that hangs on the wall, and at the end of the novel does not even trim out? (This is a term with literary critics, with whom I happened to encounter). And the house has no windows? Is the door so tight that mosquitoes don't fly in? No vetilization? It seems the comparison with mosquitoes is not the best. IMHO. ... Oooh, this is romance ... descriptions of a person .... this is clearly not my genre ... But there is humor, it brightens up the monotonous romantic descriptions. If the author is able to focus attention on the plot itself and not on the description of the face and other, the red-eyed guest, it would be more interesting to read. It is necessary from the first chapters, to grab the reader for a living, so that he would be interested to read the next chapters, there should be intrigue ... If the author wants to promote his novel, then you need to write more exciting, be able to maintain the pace of updates, although 3-4 chapters per week from 360 to 1500 words in a chapter, Well, as lucky, the golden mean is 560-680 words. If it is light, romantic novels. In the presence of at least 8-15 chapters, you can IMHO go to the forum and promote your novel by swap review. Well, there, if the novel is really exciting, both readers and the number of collections to the library will be pulled. Those who will love your novel. Successes in creativity! Respectfully,