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Blue_Shell
It was a very good story. My only criticism is about the villains in the beginning, but they get better in the end. There were a lot of loose endings as well, but maybe a side story for another time can catch everyone up. I really loved all the romance!
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HidAnas
i love love love the book... though.... the author really really need to use punctuation β£οΈ my teacher mode had to be forcefully turned off throughout the whole book....
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the_lady_doth_NGAF
I had to stop at around chapter 12 or 13. I like the idea and I really wanted to get into it but our first introduction of the male lead has been push the female lead, who is weak and disabled in a wheelchair, into a fountain. over a misunderstanding that was out of her control. The supposed male lead shoved a disabled girl in a wheelchair into a fountain. our second meeting he sexually assaults her. I know a lot of people like to argue that forcing your tongue in someone's mouth without their permission or consent is not sexual assault but in most of the first world countries that exist that is considered a punishable crime. This is only the second time the female lead has met him and she doesn't even know his name. And this is only the second time we have met him. And those are literally your first two impressions of him. I've seen enough. I'm over this trope. I don't know why authors like to write male leads like this and they think it's cute or sexy or whatever but frankly speaking I just don't think anybody should support works that encourage this kind of romanticizing of abusive and toxic behaviors in relationships. I don't know if it was supposed to be comedic... maybe it was because the author thought it was novel to have the first incident have her wheelchair go out of control and have her fall face first into his lap which causes him to push her into a fountain. But I just don't really find it funny when someone pushes a disabled girl in a wheelchair into a fountain. A girl who's disabled enough to meet a wheelchair and thus too weak to really help herself outside of the fountain or protect herself in case she crashes into anything. And I also don't think it's sexy the idea of the same person who assaulted her to go up to her and just stick his tongue in her mouth. So I'm going to go ahead and stop it here. I don't want to waste any more time or money supporting a novel that writes this sort of trash
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Chang_mie
Short and sweet story with full of happeningsβ¦. ππ love it ππππ€ππππππ§‘π§‘π₯°π₯β€οΈπβ€οΈβπ₯ππππ€©πππ₯β€οΈππ§‘π₯°ππ»πππβ€οΈβπ₯π₯πβ€οΈβ€οΈππ
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jcknoisy05
Well it my be a really short story but i was well built it gave u romance and happiness but also sadness. it also keep you entertained even though its a reincarnation story.
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Amarrida
While I did somewhat enjoy reading this story, I felt I was reading a sexually charged story written by a young teenager. The character development was poor and the story developed so fast, it caused wiplash. While it was humurous at times, it was beyond unrealistic. It has a lot of potential for improvement though. I donβt know. I am left wondering what I just read and wondering why I bothered finishing this.
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Queenebunoluwa15
This is a very amazing story! I especially love the pace and the writing style!
It's a must read!
I read it late last e but I forgot to leave a review.
Keep Writing Author!
Love you!
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Ama00
i liked how the Mc evolved in the story. The only bad thing is how the story suddenly came to an end. I thought at the end of the story there would have been more information about the twins and their future siblings?
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Secret_Santa_3799
I loved this book and it's interesting too and love between ml and fl is also good.i loved interaction between little min,little bo,fl and win mei...
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Nez0112
Thanking you for this wonderful book and a good rebirt plot
The family relationship with so much love makes the story a good one No major misunderstanding between the main characters
Congratulations for finishing this up
A good short story indeed πππ
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Adeshile_fabusoro
Nice story... A little too fast paced and mushy for me. But good over all. It also seems a little over the top. I know the author is aiming for comedy or comic relief at some point but when it goes over the top it loses it very essence lost its effect.
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Myoyi_524
Oh My God! This was a real good and interesting story. Loyal and obedient main lead and who is more depended on her man female lead π but....dear author, I really think killing her adopted mother (Qin Mei) was really unnecessaryπππ. You know I excepted her to have a happy ending because being alone and lonely for long time and dying like that was a little...π
Huh...by the way a good book make you motional, I cried, laughed....so thank you for writing it π
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Fee_Bleue
While I admit this book is better in each of the grading categories than a one, I felt that I needed to put it that way because is book is awful:
It feels like itβs the authorβs perverted fantasies. The main character has everythinng go right for her, except when it goes just wrong enough for massive impact, but never so bad that she doesnβt come out on top. It moves so fast pased that youβll get whiplash, and you feel no strong connection to the main characters or strong opposition to the βvilliansβ. This of course is on top of the fact that the author accidentally switched the original name with the rebirth name right at the beginning which made a slightly major plot point no longer make sense. I feel like the author had a good idea, but does not understand writing enough for the idea to be portrayed realistically
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ito16
good story plot, unique character for both make and female lead. their chemistry relationship with each other. thanks for the story to the author. wishes you all the best and good health.πππ€βΊοΈ
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Journae_Askin
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PensivePrincess
To say the story is fast-paced is quite an understatement. ππ
If you're looking for something to pass the time, this story might just be what you need. ππ
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Jacqueline_Bryant
I loved this book! I loved the story, the characters and the storyline. The love and caring of individuals coming together to make their own family was truly beautiful and inspiring! Im sorry it's at an end but I don't regret the journey.
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RounakVyasSharma
I enjoyed reading the story. It is well paced with good description of side characters as well. A pleasant surprise were little Bo's kidsπ₯°π₯°π₯°
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RounakVyasSharma
Now this is what I call a power packed and sweet story ππ Author you are very good when it comes to justifying every character according to the story
Love this story β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ.
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Priya_Garg
great story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished
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paintedaisys
Ok, the story was good at first. Seemed funny with the whole reincarnarion parts, but all of a audden everything got so fast paced. Like author, slow down tf. It made the story less enjoyable.
And so many random sexual scenes?? Like the way it builded up doesnβt even make sense. I felt zero romance, cause the writing was so fast and there was barely any room for development in the characters.
Fl was likeable at first but later on became sorta dumb? This was after meeting ml tooπ€¦π»ββοΈ And the ml, donβt even get me started, typical ass self entitled guy who knows heβs the **** and hot, and lowkey forces himself onto her. Just was not a fan of either leads.
And the βsisterβ too? Author I donβt know why you made her dialogue sound like a 13 year old talking when fl and her are the same age. Did you try to make her sound βcuteβ and innocent or something? Iβm not sure but it made the writing less interesting and professional.
Overall, I dont recommend, seems enjoyable at first but wasted my time reading. Way too fast paced and poorly developed characters. Author take this review as constructive criticism, cause this story could be way better if heavy editing is done.
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ZAINAB_OYEWANDE
Best story so far that I have read,my first novel to give review on,qudos to you author, more of it the story line is so perfectly arranged,
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Tonisa_Adhikary
overall story is good its about sweet male lead badass female lead and cute story with full revenge and its beautiful too. so its wroth to reading it
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Priya_Garg
Nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd want baddies to be punished and want hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably
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Tonisa_Adhikary
its a fast story and a normal story...it have beautifully female lead.... lovely male lead of couse they have a evil family but i got the story interesting and its good
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Reading101
The story is very different. It doesn't give details as other novels would. Its too rushed in my opinion but the writing is very good. Hope the author continues to grow with this writing experience.
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