i have only read one chapter so i will see how it goes but if its going to go in the direction i think its going then it will be in my top 10 to read list
it has a good premise even though only a single chapter is written. this story basically starts with the entire universe destroyed because of a strange creature leaving only a girl and an old man. the old man fights the creature but is not his match and yeah the creature wants something from the world man called pearl of time
I AM SORRY BUT I AM GOING TO GIVE MYSELF A 5 STAR.
SORRY TO BE SO SHAMELESS.THIS IS MY FIRST STORY AND I HOPE YOU LIKE IT AND ENJOY IT.MY ENGLISH IS NOT SO GOOD BUT NOT BAD EITHER IT CAN BE CONSIDER OK. I ACCEPT POINTING OUT MY MISTAKES BUT NOT POINTLESS CRITICISM
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