Honestly I really enjoyed the first parts despite how weird and chaotic it was. But then slowly it became repetitive and I couldn't take the story seriously anymore. It would have been fine if it was trying to be a comedy but...
This story could have been good.
The mc was everywhere at the beginning, it was kinda confusing to read, but I could bear with it. The story was still enjoyable at the beginning.
At around chapter 40, mc suddenly returned to the past and lived in another body. This was pretty much a start of a new arch.
At chapter 56, the mc got drugged and raped. It made me so uncomfortable, I had to drop this novel.
I'm here for comedy and adventure, not humiliated mc.
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MC is an indecisive trash
Does not have a plan, never even tried making a plan, never even thought about solving the main problems he supposedly wrote in his novel
He steals the MC’s opportunities for literally nothing other that to stroke his ego
And he’s an indecisive virgin
Also the system is stupid
This novel for me is way too fast paced and chaoticall for me to enjoy and just genuinely confused me when i read it.There were also times where i was frustrated by the lack of development on the characters personalities and common sense.So in my opinion dont read this book if you get annoyed at charcters with no common sense or who are shameless to the extreme/seem a bit dumb.
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The story is unique, it generates new ideas, you feel like it's leading you somewhere. However you have no clue where the story is going. The MC is overpowered which it normal but then you find out he is weak, then overpowered again. SPOILER:
The stories is nonsensical he starts off as a student then magically becomes a teacher because why not he can. You don't know how he earns it but he spends system money to by books and pills. He uses this to learn then teach his class = so he can make a future army.
I have decided to stop reading around ch25 who knows by ch50 he could be the principal.
Not my cup of tea, to say the least...
I found The Novel's Extra quite addicting by the time I stumbled across it. Although addicting I dont think it should win any awards or anything or the story should be immortalized, it had its fair share of misha** and errors but its still good nontheless for me and many others. The concept of an author being placed in his own novel mostly as a side character was such an amazing idea to me that I went hunting for other kinds of novels with such concept. Albeit some were good I'd say a lot were mediocre or just plain bad. I mean no offense saying this, but this doesnt really scratch that 'amazing' novel itch ive been wanting to scratch since finishing TNE. Its not good but its not bad....just meh, this novel is just another time killer for me during quarantine. But hey I decided to drop this pretty early in the story. I may regret it or I may not, who knows?
Thank you for your effort author but it isnt for me. Hopefully many others will see this novel and decide to stick around longer than I had. Best wishes for everyone! :D
Early chapters are good but later ones started to taper off and what you read on the earlier chapters that got you interested starts to go down the drain. Character development was good but it got annoying and repetitive in later chapters.
Some later chapters starting from 50 seemed to be forced, I don't know if it is due to some changes but it got dull later on too.
At chapter 5 and this story is complete garbage. Like WTF...??? Can’t believe people read this and give it good reading. Wasted my time. 🤮horrible storyline.
Good story so far, almost peed myself more than once from the funny parts. Lots of good humor and good character development so far. Hope the author adds more soon.
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Dropping this after chapter 42 . While I do understand that you want some kind of fresh start but I didnt read 40 chapter so that it would all completely change
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