Reviews of A Fool's Dream by RandomGuy - Webnovel

First story indeed :D Looks promising, but there's still plenty to improve - especially in formatting and capitalization of letters. Here's my initial review as a support (subject to changes, once book is complete) Cheers, RandomGuy!

Like the writing and the story, especially with the main character that looks awesome, nice. Although some words looks more longer but it's still okay. And some parts are still confusing but I would see how it goes

Those looking for some fantasy and adventure, then this is for you! The author does a good job in building the world and characters. I'd love to follow their journey more! Keep it up!

Hello, this the author and I'm shamelessly reviews my own story with five stars, I hope you all enjoy the story! Please hop on and enjoy the ride!