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Kaxhi13
tbh, i feel like i've seen a fanfic with a similar premise, especially the early parts, deviating in the later parts like the ancient one name, programmer, and the interactions with the devs, though this took a different route of making his own guild and base. i think it was chaotic good, i saw it back at fanfic. whilst the chaotic good took time to develop the arc in ygddrasil, this was like more of a summary adding some details i would have, had i been the guy. good thing the story deviated else i would have called plagiarism(if there's such a thing in fanfic, haha). anyway, i like the story, at least the mc is not psycothic like the one in the chaotic good, grammar is okay and stuff.
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YoungMaster_MtTai
I love this story, it's a great fanfic and i would recommend reading it.
Though i think he should have done something about the level cap, so he could get even more powerful. He is already op, but if you decided to add some powerful characters. Some people won't like their character weaker than mc
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Feebling
Another dead story. Just delete it and don't waste the space. It only takes up the space and makes searching for stories that are complete or actually ongoing MUCH harder.
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TheTreeOfJoy
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hawiiinss
Would love to see more πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Daoist003250
I am very addicted to this story, I find it amazing is really holding my attention, I want moresssssssssss, looking forward to the next chapter.
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ZGearCecil
Interesting Premise. Promising Story. With a little more work, it might be even more interesting and worthy of greatness. I wish there were more chapters, quicker release, but I know how hard it is to keep up with that and how quick one can burn out. I wish you luck, fellow author. Here's a 5/5 for your effort.
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DarkWolf_929
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Pedobearr
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TurtleManiacc
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Goodbiscuit666
I have been looking for a book with a dragon as the main character, and I can't believe that I actually found a good one.
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Pripriri
Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic.
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noobageddon_
Wow
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TheHiddenSword
Author here, just a fun fanfiction I write, OP characters going around in worlds to take care of a certain threat ( didn't appear yet ). Fluff and romance. Also they are married so except the full package.
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EijiSeishuu
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mutekishifu
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Hasu_Yodd
This novel is absolutely fun to read fan-fic and till now only 3 chapter have been out.
The only problem I had was the start I mean it was like...
boom he is in garbage
boom he is helped by an old lady
and again biggest f*ck sorry I mean boom 10 years have passed.
WTF....
The effort MC has put in in npc and their lore is cool although we are only told about 1 /10 npc.
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WorldlyDesires
Love the story so far far but I was wondering what happened to the woman that let the mc stay at her house, will he leave her money so she lives the rest of her life easily or is she already dead? Kind of hoping for the first option since you doing cultivator kind of thing so he repays her for the help.
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