It is the continuation of story of John n Catherine n her twin sister caroline.how Caroline gets settled post trauma and her impending delivery and also life later.
Had A good journey with author lizabelle 88 in "the ceos painted skin" nand now it continues with this story.i extend my good wishes for this story.hope it is liked as earlier.the updates are to the date,good impeccable English and her perseverance, commitment in writing brings me here.keep going author.💕👍
Very nice novel, started reading it like 2 months ago and it has been captivating. At first I thought it was going to be a short story when Caroline got married to Mike but at the long run many things started unfolding making the write-up full of twists and thereby creating a very interesting and sound novel for tireless readers. The author has done a really good job in keeping up with the novel chapter by chapter and updating the readers in time
I love this story! I suspense of waiting for the next chapters are driving me to keep checking and checking, sometimes two or three times. But I'm willing to wait. Thank you for reading this. I love each detail!
I really like this book. Is it completed yet?! I feel like it was at a exciting event! Please let me know when it complete please! Did the boys find her? Why didn't she tell her sister she was pregnant? I hope Allison get a little of heart and not kill her husband. Alex keep digging!
Hello dear author
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story❤️❤️I have read Ur CEO painted skin n it was so beautifully described even the continuing part of that book is amazing...hats off to you ❤️ I will definitely recommend Ur novel to my friends....n one more thing thank you for updating regularly 👍👍
Writter weldone. The story is good so far but sometimes the mix up that you bring makes us the readers confused. It is taught provoking novel that makes the reader tensed and anxious to read next chapter.
But in general you are really doing well. Thank you
The story is proceeding seriously.the female lead is undergoing change in her character ofcourse towards a good way. We are going to witness development of Caroline , all the way from a selfish to victim to greedy and now to an ambition oriented woman. A few people are trying to build relationship with her.who would she choose and who would reside in her heart and who would get hurt in this process , is intriguing.
The author has planned well in advance how to keep the reader hooked into this beautiful story on the life of Caroline.
Eagerly waiting to read as I'm curious to know how it moulds.
I just started reading this book. So far it's interesting.. Really interesting. I want to know more the more I read. Can't help but to know more. Done a great job author.. Hope u will write something more..
Nice book. There's a bit of grammatical error but if you look past that you'd enjoy the story. Of course you need to read the first novel to get better understanding.
I am confused, was Catherine or no did she have a son before she was kidnapped?
Nevertheless good story kip it work.
I love the story from the beginning. The writing is great though they may be minor grammar mistakes. But it’s not to the point that it obstruct the readers. Anyway nice story! I love the plot and oohh lord the steamy session. Sorry for being a shameless reader 🤭
Even if the readers haven’t read the previous book regarding the other characters, don’t worry you will not be confused since there will be introduced at the beginning.
After Catherine's story, now it's time for Caroline to get her own story. Caroline is a selfish and greedy woman, wish to see how her character develops. The story and characterization is good, there might be chances of improvement in writing. Keep up the good work author.
This certainly as surprise. A story set in the Philippines.. That'd explain some of the few English ticks that I spotted. TL:DR for the review: It's great, but would benefit greatly from a remaster.
Criticism time. Story and pacing is fairly done, no problem there. Dialogue however, feels a tad bit stiff at times. Might want to make it feel more natural with just a wee bit more contraction usage. (ie: 'I'm' instead of 'I am') Grammar could also use some polishing, and there are times where there's just one giant block of dialogue with no stopping in between. Break those up with a dash a descriptive writing. Describe their cadence, their tone, as they're doing their monologue to spice things up.
That's it I guess. Great effort. Keep on keeping on 👍
Cant wait for clara know that john was her husband son. I hope that clara never forgive her husband because he do the wrong thing for cheating but the worst part is he let her wife raise his son without knowing the truth, and after his mistress want to reconcile with their son he immediately just tell john the truth as if it's not a big deal. How can be hector be so cruel. I really hate him. I wish he will get miserable life.