Hi author, I love your book, I like strong FLs :) I wonder if this book is signed if you are interested in getting a non-exclusive contract for this please contact me :)
Pretty interesting story with a strong female lead. I thought the storyline was pretty good and straightforward. There were also a lot of twists. Great job author 👍
I FRICKIN LOVE THIS STORY. Shes a bad ass who knows what she wants and isnt a damsel in distress. I cant wait till the end of the book and to see what happens. <3
I'm only a few chapters in, but this story has caught and kept my attention. I have a bad habit of only skimming books when I'm reading them, but not this one. Not only is this a great story concept, but the author writes with grace and ease, the words flow seamlessly.
First of all why I read this because it's a vamp romance (My weakness T_T) secondly the narration has a tinge of mystery because of FLs occupation. The initiative was really good and by third chapter it was a hook. The plotline is marvellous and there aren't many vampire romances here on WN. Quoting the title which itself is inviting and the wonderful cover author chose which I believe was intentionally done :P
Regarding grammar and vocabulary usage,author doesn't lack the spices. The only flaw I found was the emotions weren't pulled out upto fuller. The scenario of fear and *******, it lacked the FLs emotions. Though author did well but keeping this in mind that this work has potential, this flaw should be treated asap. And as other readers suggested don't update that fast, grab some readers, torture them lol and update one or two chapters a day. ❤ The name Alyssa reminded me of Alyssa Monet, she's the vamp character from my favourite Wattpad author's (CaitSarai) book. If you want ideas or help that narration might help a lot. I'll be keeping the track of this narration as I want to know where secrets will be unfolded, Vam** ! Oh vamps are my love! ❤
Aaaahhhh! Vampires and Detectives!
Aaahhhhhh!
Let me shout a bit of my excitement 😋
The story is intriguing and the author has done a good job with the pace of the story - neither too fast not too slow.
I like the FL and how she grapples with her emotions.
All the best for your future endeavours, Author!
I think, the way you writing is too formal. Make sure your reader is reading novel.
Some paragraph is too long. Cut it into pieces.
You need more cliche in first three chapter that can make your reader heart beat faster.
I've already fallen in love with Kara. I'm very drawn to a kickass female lead. The writing is neat, too, easy to suck you in. I really recommend this.
I am read a few chapters and it hooked me to the story. I never read this kind of genre but it's really good.
And the book cover is amazing. Very eyecatching. <3<3<3
Unique genres of vampires and police/detective!
I personally love strong female leads so this story is great. The author also updates super frequently! 35 Chapters in less than 2 weeks! (Strong applause)
This seems like the kind of plot Netflix would sign lol!
You should give it a read if you enjoy these genres
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