The story is amazing! The author presented the characters and world background very well. It has some great plot twist! Really like it. Good job author!
The character dialogue is pretty good I can't get the setting but it seems to be in Korea seeing the names of the characters and one place called Itaewon which I saw the show for. It feels like immortals living with each other or something like that, that quality and flow of the first chapter is great and I feel like reading more right after.
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the title is really unique and the cover reeled me in
I personally love romance novels! Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
Despite not being much into this type of writing style or genre, I find this to be a somewhat enjoyable story at times, which speaks levels about the quality of the work. The description of everything is really nice, and the plot is actually kind of compelling. Although, sometimes it is very confusing.
This could be due to how hard it is for me to focus on things, but sometimes I find myself losing track of which character is which and who exactly is talking, along with where exactly they are at any given moment. The book often switches between time periods and points of view, which doesn’t really help.
As a result, many things feel somewhat inconsequential to me. Again, I’m stupid so everything I say here could be very wrong. I do believe the book is still being updated and is not yet complete, so I can’t give my full opinion on the final result.
All in all, though I was very critical of it, this story is pretty good. I’m sure many other people will enjoy it more than I do, but I guess it’s not really my thing. Nonetheless, I can respect it for what it is and what the author set out to do. Thank you, and have a good day.
I really really love the plot, it's a very creative one. You write good and to the point, but you should add a little description to some parts. Other than that, and a few grammatical errors here and there, it's a great story!
Interesting plotline. With a good description about the characters the story develops. The emotions are very well explained. Really loved it author.....more chapter please
After reading the first chapter after the prologue, the story began to captivate me. The details portrayed in this story is extremely in depth. I absolutely love the story development and wish to continue reading more and more!! Good job to the author!!
Oh shoot! Why is soooo good?! Lol. I love how detailed each sentences are...I love how you portray the character's personalities and how you write your story! Good job author! 👍👍
This story is packed with description, interesting characters, and the story development is well done. I would definitely recommend this story to those who are interested in romance, long descriptive chapters, and interesting dynamics between characters!
The story synopsis is great for me! The story characterization is really good! The plotline is well written, maybe the author really have a love for her work!
Reading this story pulls me back to the Kpop industry, relating it to the relevant celebrities. Thank you for the story, much effort indeed spent to bring in the different characters into the story, setting it up for the readers. Keep up the effort.
Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
In the shape of an "L" on her forehead
Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
So much to do, so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the backstreets?
You'll never know if you don't go
You'll never shine if you don't glow
Hey now, you're an all star
Get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star
Get the show on, get paid
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold
It's a cool place, and they say it gets colder
You're bundled up now, wait 'til you get older
But the meteor men beg to differ
Judging by the hole in the satellite picture
The ice we skate is getting pretty thin
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim
My world's on fire, how 'bout yours?
That's the way I like it and I'll never get bored
Hey now, you're an all star
Get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star
Get the show on, get paid
All that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold
Somebody once asked
Could I spare some change for gas?
"I need to get myself away from this place"
I said, "Yep, what a concept
I could use a little fuel myself
And we could all use a little change"
Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
So much to do, so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the backstreets?
You'll never know if you don't go (go!)
You'll never shine if you don't glow
Hey now, you're an all star
Get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star
Get the show on, get paid
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold
Hey now
Hey now
Hey, hey, hey now
Hey now
Hey now, you're an all star
Hey now, you're an all star
Hey now, you're an all star
Only shooting stars break the mold
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