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Pandoras_Actor
I will say please make more chapters I think this has a lot of potential and is rather unique as I have not seen any other novel like this one
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zd4zaasa
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Azathoth_PlotGod
Still waiting for this to be continued.
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I_love_otakus
OHOHOHO
I SEE TRAPS
I PUT IT IN LIBRARY
OHOHOHOHO
BUT ONLY 8 CHAPTERS [img=faceslap]
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Neerajbapat
I loved it a lot. No issues with understanding , he is so good and sexy ahaha , loved the way you wrote it. Please continue with the story na.
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shinnenat
The story is interesting and want to read more of it. Im waoting for the update author please continue it ..................................:)))))
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Scumotaku
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Roon_Toon1
I love this novel it is just funny and wants MOAR but it has been dropped or put on a hiatus or whatever.
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Azathoth_PlotGod
Luv this book. Need moar. Please.
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I_B
Great Story, don't really have anything to complain about unless I pick away at every little thing. But that would just ruin the experience. The only 2 changes I would ask for to improve the experience. It would be more frequent uploads. the 2nd change would be either an upload schedule or a timeframe letting us know when we can expect another chapter. An example of what I mean by timeframe would be the following at the bottom of the synopsis:
{
"1 chapter will be uploaded 2-3 weeks after the last chapter was uploaded."
}
Or at the end of each chapter letting the audience know when they should expect the next chapter. An Example:
{
"*A Chapter"
"Next chapter should be uploaded in 2-3 weeks"
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*Comments
}
Just to let the audience know what the situation is. As it is not uncommon for light novel to get abandoned without the author ever saying anything, because they were no longer interested in it or wanted to write something else.
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_Miyasaka
Very unique and fun to read.
The system isnt developed as major plot point but as a comical tool that while helps to drive the plot forward (mainly through increasing mc's cultivation) isnt the mc's sole motivation to do the things he/she/??? does. The fact that techniques and itens bought dont have lengthy technical descriptions, without meridians, affinities, cores, dantians, elements, etc etc. help prove the idea that cultivation itself isnt the focus of the novel.
So far, it has been a bit ~(more than "a bit")~ rushed but that didnt make it any less enjoyable.
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Read up to chapter 8 out of 8, 28 of April/2020
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AppIe
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Daley
Why there no harem tagggu i wan the haremmm tagggu if he trap he seduce manny manny poople hmm. I want hareeemmmuuu its been so long since i seee a harem storrryu
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ASURA_INFIRINO
Very entertaining but lacking In chapters, that is all i have to say.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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ShinSungmi
There are traps here which is πππππππ plus there is humour, which makes the novel awesome! πππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Norah_Koch
love this book very very very much... please update more. Hahaha I am a fan of traps XD TRAPS MUST RULE THE WORLD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH
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LordofLightning
unique novel, will be waiting to read more. be waiting for the nxt update, should be interesting. pls update soon author-san!
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Destiny_Aitsuji
I want to see how far the power of traps can go... xD <4
Please don't drop the book even after WPC is finished... I want to see you write till the end muhahah! Also, you need 5k words to qualify. Will you be ok with just 1 chapter? (Now I'm just outright pressuring you to complete this...)
Anyways, fighting! Traps rule!
Jaky124